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Rodolfo_Piskorski · 2nd Feb 04

Hello!

I am an amateur song composer. I am starting now. I am Brazilian and most time I write music in English. But I managed to write one in Polish, a language I am learning now.

You can find the songs and the lyrics in the following links.

THE SEA OF THE ABSENTEE
http://www.angelfire.com/oz/piskorski/sea_eng.htm

DISTURBING BEING
http://www.angelfire.com/oz/piskorski/being_eng.htm

BEZKRESNA NOC
http://www.angelfire.com/oz/piskorski/noc_eng.htm

Thanks a lot!
Rodolfo

PJ: · 2nd Feb 04

Downloading now

lol

PJ: · 2nd Feb 04

Ok, I've heard the first two.

They are very well written, you really know how to write songs, the only little thing I see that you should practice more is the vocal part; you should practice your vocals, but I'm not sure if that's what you want, cause you called yourself an amateur song composer, so... if that's just it, then they're really well written, if you also want to sing them, just practice your vocals a little more

Nel · 2nd Feb 04

Yeah I checked out the first two....

your songwriting chops are good.....but u r a little bit out of tune... both ur vocals and your guitar.

Leesa · 4th Feb 04

:: ouch ::
ill download soon, I'm into the same thing as u!!

Rodolfo_Piskorski · 5th Feb 04

Thanks a lot for all the support. I really like to write and I'm way more into the writing thing (not only songs). I just think that music is a way of making your writing go beyond. I know my voice is untrained and my microphone is cheap and horrible and I can't tune my guitar by myself, so it's just a hobby.

Why hasn't anyone tried to listen to third song? There is translation in there. "Bezkresna Noc" means "endless night".

Rodolfo

hey!nkf · 5th Feb 04

nice I'll be sure to download

andyboy · 6th Feb 04

that's good dude..better that wot I could do..

nelly

Rodolfo_Piskorski · 7th Feb 04

Hey you all. Thanks a lot for the support. I am really grateful. Today I recorded the first Portuguese song I've written. It would be nice for the ones who only know Nelly's Portuguese to get to know the Brazilian one. The link is:

CAMISA AZUL-MARINHO (navy blue shirt)
http://www.angelfire.com/oz/piskorski/camisa_eng.htm

Txs a lot!
Rodolfo

Gothsicle · 7th Feb 04

Perrty goose...heh... carlo's right...your alittle out...but it's catchy! keep it up!

2nd Feb 04	#1
Rodolfo_Piskorski Nelly Furtado Fan Join Date: 22nd Nov 03 Location: SC, Brazil Posts: 70	Hello! I am an amateur song composer. I am starting now. I am Brazilian and most time I write music in English. But I managed to write one in Polish, a language I am learning now. You can find the songs and the lyrics in the following links. THE SEA OF THE ABSENTEE http://www.angelfire.com/oz/piskorski/sea_eng.htm DISTURBING BEING http://www.angelfire.com/oz/piskorski/being_eng.htm BEZKRESNA NOC http://www.angelfire.com/oz/piskorski/noc_eng.htm Thanks a lot! Rodolfo __________________ "O tempo passa e nem tudo fica - a obra inteira de uma vida."

2nd Feb 04	#2
PJ: Pedro JosÃ© Join Date: 29th Sep 03 Location: Lisbon Age: 27 Posts: 3,764	Downloading now lol __________________ "If you want to change the world, change yourself." ???http://www.flickr.com/photos/pedrojose???

2nd Feb 04	#3
PJ: Pedro JosÃ© Join Date: 29th Sep 03 Location: Lisbon Age: 27 Posts: 3,764	Ok, I've heard the first two. They are very well written, you really know how to write songs, the only little thing I see that you should practice more is the vocal part; you should practice your vocals, but I'm not sure if that's what you want, cause you called yourself an amateur song composer, so... if that's just it, then they're really well written, if you also want to sing them, just practice your vocals a little more __________________ "If you want to change the world, change yourself." ???http://www.flickr.com/photos/pedrojose???

2nd Feb 04	#4
Nel i eat red carpet Join Date: 25th Mar 02 Location: Earth Posts: 10,711	Yeah I checked out the first two.... your songwriting chops are good.....but u r a little bit out of tune... both ur vocals and your guitar. __________________ Always Share & Care :-)

4th Feb 04	#5
Leesa is blood thirsty. Join Date: 22nd Mar 03 Location: Sydney Age: 19 Posts: 8,135	:: ouch :: ill download soon, I'm into the same thing as u!! __________________ Old skool Furtado represent. www.last.fm/user/angryprincess

5th Feb 04	#6
Rodolfo_Piskorski Nelly Furtado Fan Join Date: 22nd Nov 03 Location: SC, Brazil Posts: 70	Thanks a lot for all the support. I really like to write and I'm way more into the writing thing (not only songs). I just think that music is a way of making your writing go beyond. I know my voice is untrained and my microphone is cheap and horrible and I can't tune my guitar by myself, so it's just a hobby. Why hasn't anyone tried to listen to third song? There is translation in there. "Bezkresna Noc" means "endless night". Rodolfo __________________ "O tempo passa e nem tudo fica - a obra inteira de uma vida."

5th Feb 04	#7
hey!nkf Obsessed Nelly Fan Join Date: 22nd Oct 02 Location: u.s.a Posts: 102	nice I'll be sure to download __________________ I'm always crying in the inside" I'm a little emo bitch."

6th Feb 04	#8
andyboy Silver Member Join Date: 16th Dec 03 Location: england..manchester Posts: 612	that's good dude..better that wot I could do.. nelly __________________ who dares wins...

7th Feb 04	#9
Rodolfo_Piskorski Nelly Furtado Fan Join Date: 22nd Nov 03 Location: SC, Brazil Posts: 70	Hey you all. Thanks a lot for the support. I am really grateful. Today I recorded the first Portuguese song I've written. It would be nice for the ones who only know Nelly's Portuguese to get to know the Brazilian one. The link is: CAMISA AZUL-MARINHO (navy blue shirt) http://www.angelfire.com/oz/piskorski/camisa_eng.htm Txs a lot! Rodolfo __________________ "O tempo passa e nem tudo fica - a obra inteira de uma vida."

7th Feb 04	#10
Gothsicle Rest in peace, love <3 Join Date: 25th Dec 02 Location: right here in her arms Age: 18 Posts: 2,928	Perrty goose...heh... carlo's right...your alittle out...but it's catchy! keep it up! __________________ ^^click for the myfrickinspace

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