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FunkyFreshness · 14th Jul 04

I wrote this when I was a bit younger. I wanted to become a songwriter...
I don't really share much. But here goes..

It's much easier for me to keep my heart
away from my sleeve
And for reasons beyond my reach
Affections are only for the weak

Your fondess was on my unsteady hand
In my mind I had no choice
It wouldn't be me, but you
That'd endure getting destroyed

My selfishness tore your heart out
and devoured it slowly
It was a high toll to pay
For one who still wished to stay

Yes, you decided not to budge
But you were turned inside out
holding tightly for me a grudge
that made me cry outloud

You claim any kindness in you is dead
Thanks to me and all the poison I spoon fed
Yet I'm still here
regretting my frigid mistakes.

PJ: · 14th Jul 04

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Sometimes life sucks

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Hope your better now

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*kisses*

FunkyFreshness · 14th Jul 04

I'm a big fan of your Emoticons!!!

Rodrigo · 14th Jul 04

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mariposas02

You claim any kindness in you is dead
Thanks to me and all the poison I spoon fed
Yet I'm still here
regretting my frigid mistakes.

Like it, specially this part.

FunkyFreshness · 15th Jul 04

Thank you that's very nice. I'm very touchy about letting other people see what I've written. I wrote this awhile ago and I was a different person and stuff.

Rodrigo · 15th Jul 04

Good you wanted to share it with us

Silvy · 15th Jul 04

I like a lot the way you write it's really cool!

FunkyFreshness · 16th Jul 04

Thanks...I guess I should post stuff more often.
You guys are really nice

14th Jul 04	#1
FunkyFreshness Spewing with manly-ness Join Date: 27th Dec 03 Location: United States of America Age: 22 Posts: 2,026	I wrote this when I was a bit younger. I wanted to become a songwriter... I don't really share much. But here goes.. It's much easier for me to keep my heart away from my sleeve And for reasons beyond my reach Affections are only for the weak Your fondess was on my unsteady hand In my mind I had no choice It wouldn't be me, but you That'd endure getting destroyed My selfishness tore your heart out and devoured it slowly It was a high toll to pay For one who still wished to stay Yes, you decided not to budge But you were turned inside out holding tightly for me a grudge that made me cry outloud You claim any kindness in you is dead Thanks to me and all the poison I spoon fed Yet I'm still here regretting my frigid mistakes. __________________ I'm armed and I'm equal more fun for the people.

14th Jul 04	#2
PJ: Pedro JosÃ© Join Date: 29th Sep 03 Location: Lisbon Age: 27 Posts: 3,764	" border='0'> Sometimes life sucks " border='0'> Hope your better now " border='0'> kisses __________________ "If you want to change the world, change yourself." ???http://www.flickr.com/photos/pedrojose???

14th Jul 04	#3
FunkyFreshness Spewing with manly-ness Join Date: 27th Dec 03 Location: United States of America Age: 22 Posts: 2,026	I'm a big fan of your Emoticons!!! __________________ I'm armed and I'm equal more fun for the people.

15th Jul 04	#5
FunkyFreshness Spewing with manly-ness Join Date: 27th Dec 03 Location: United States of America Age: 22 Posts: 2,026	Thank you that's very nice. I'm very touchy about letting other people see what I've written. I wrote this awhile ago and I was a different person and stuff. __________________ I'm armed and I'm equal more fun for the people.

15th Jul 04	#6
Rodrigo Sir Join Date: 3rd May 03 Location: San Sebastián, Spain Age: 26 Posts: 4,794	Good you wanted to share it with us __________________ Any resemblance with the reality is mere coincidence.

15th Jul 04	#7
Silvy Platinum Member Join Date: 24th Mar 04 Location: Mexico Age: 19 Posts: 8,034	I like a lot the way you write it's really cool! __________________ No other choice than livin' it! http://myspace.com/silvyvc

16th Jul 04	#8
FunkyFreshness Spewing with manly-ness Join Date: 27th Dec 03 Location: United States of America Age: 22 Posts: 2,026	Thanks...I guess I should post stuff more often. You guys are really nice __________________ I'm armed and I'm equal more fun for the people.

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