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is blood thirsty.
![]() Join Date: 22nd Mar 03
Location: Sydney
Age: 19
Posts: 8,135
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Wanting You
24.10.04 Accepting the silence, staring at you Wondering what your mind is going through My body aches and yearns for your touch Want to feel your lips, say I love you so much I run my finger across what would be your cheek Close my eyes tightly though my eyes still leak I can feel my heart beat faster every time you smile It just hurts me more cause of the separating miles My lips they tremble as I watch you staring away The atmosphere turns cold, then I hate living this way I can feel my heart crumbling, my soul becomes so alone This pain is unbearable, our love set in a hard stone You were a turning point in my life, I saw faith again Giving up months of love, letting all that lust end I threw it all away because I want you more than anything All those tears and heartbreaks suddenly now mean nothing You?re the new light of my life, I?m just hoping you can see it Everything and the perfect one for you, I?m eagerly willing to be it What are you feeling right now, what?s on your mind Do you feel the same way I do, or do you think I?m blind Am I making an idiot out of myself, do I seem ridiculous Are you uncomfortable around me, am I seemingly delirious Won?t you come and save me, won?t you be the hero of my dreams I?m wanting you so bad, trust me, it?s a lot deeper than it seems x - wow a poetry submission since ages.. well, wow. |
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Tell me I'm pretty!
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wow that's beautiful Leesa
nice! hehehe
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I like it!! Good journey through the feelings.
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Old-skool 4 lyfe. <3
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Good God, Leesa. Your poetic absence was felt, but you came back with that and I'm lost for words. I can totally relate to it and you know who I'm thinking about when I read that. It's too beautiful for words.
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awesome Leesa!!
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Obsessed Nelly Fan
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very good!! hey, hey did you fell in love??
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is blood thirsty.
![]() Join Date: 22nd Mar 03
Location: Sydney
Age: 19
Posts: 8,135
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hahaha thanks guys! them comments mean alot to me, seeing as I thought it was total shithouse
![]() nikki - I love how our compliments towards each others poetry are that kind of way. we're always so speechless! kiraja - love? heh I think so.. it's a bit confusing really! |
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