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Old 24th Oct 04   #1
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Wanting You
24.10.04

Accepting the silence, staring at you
Wondering what your mind is going through
My body aches and yearns for your touch
Want to feel your lips, say I love you so much
I run my finger across what would be your cheek
Close my eyes tightly though my eyes still leak

I can feel my heart beat faster every time you smile
It just hurts me more cause of the separating miles
My lips they tremble as I watch you staring away
The atmosphere turns cold, then I hate living this way
I can feel my heart crumbling, my soul becomes so alone
This pain is unbearable, our love set in a hard stone

You were a turning point in my life, I saw faith again
Giving up months of love, letting all that lust end
I threw it all away because I want you more than anything
All those tears and heartbreaks suddenly now mean nothing
You?re the new light of my life, I?m just hoping you can see it
Everything and the perfect one for you, I?m eagerly willing to be it

What are you feeling right now, what?s on your mind
Do you feel the same way I do, or do you think I?m blind
Am I making an idiot out of myself, do I seem ridiculous
Are you uncomfortable around me, am I seemingly delirious
Won?t you come and save me, won?t you be the hero of my dreams
I?m wanting you so bad, trust me, it?s a lot deeper than it seems

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wow a poetry submission since ages.. well, wow.
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Old 27th Oct 04   #2
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wow that's beautiful Leesa

nice! hehehe
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Yes wow is the word. Amazing poem Leesa. I hope the person whom it's about realises and feels the same way. They're very lucky and I'm sure they'd be flattered.
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I like it!! Good journey through the feelings.
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Good God, Leesa. Your poetic absence was felt, but you came back with that and I'm lost for words. I can totally relate to it and you know who I'm thinking about when I read that. It's too beautiful for words.
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awesome Leesa!!
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very good!! hey, hey did you fell in love??
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I could really feel this as reading it, and that is rare for me.
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Old 29th Oct 04   #9
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hahaha thanks guys! them comments mean alot to me, seeing as I thought it was total shithouse

nikki - I love how our compliments towards each others poetry are that kind of way. we're always so speechless!

kiraja - love? heh I think so.. it's a bit confusing really!
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