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Old 4th Nov 04   #1
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The violins build to a beautiful crescendo,
I imagine your heart underneath my fingertips.
Close your eyes, softly now,
Don't tarnish this moment, don't break this delicate spell.
I love this feeling I get when I'm with you,
The music swirls and caresses our skin.
What to do when I feel I'm falling for you?
Oh, what I'd give to hear you say you love me,
As this beautiful music pumps through my veins.
Your hands are placed on the small of my back,
My head is on your chest.
Lay me down and hold me in your arms,
Let me immerse myself in you and your smell,
Your taste and your softest touch.
The most beautiful words mean nothing at all,
I'd prefer this feeling to remain unique and inexplicable to me.
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that was really nice... I enjoyed that.
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Well written but a corny metaphor
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Erm, there wasn't a concious attempt at a metaphor in there.

I was actually listening to a really nice piece of music and thinking how perfect it would be to share some moments with someone with that music playing.
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that was really good, it's soooooo emotional in poetic terms
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