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portugeeqn · 15th Jan 04

The doctor told me that I was sick
death came to mind very quick
Up to that point life was just great
now it was a journey of unknown fate
I became depressed told no one what I had
I started to get weak and always so sad
seeing my friends wonder what today they would wear
Me wondering if this would be my last breath of air
I realised what a fatal mistake I made in my past
How life was just moving so incredibly fast
It was minutes of pleasure to years of grief
My body was being taken by a horrible thief
It was time to share my secret with those who should know
I didnt want my family nor friends to get it didnt want it to grow
Unprotected sex with a guy I hardly knew
Nothing can happen to me I believed was true

Ok I wrote that years ago.I don't know how it came to me.But it's not about myself.

Rebecca · 15th Jan 04

Sandy....that's deep....I'm glad it wasn't about u.

PJ: · 15th Jan 04

Quote:

Originally Posted by portugeeqn

Ok I wrote that years ago.I don't know how it came to me.But it's not about myself.

Sigmund Freud, analyse this

It's very, very good, btw

Erica · 15th Jan 04

very well done!! wow, that's better then what I write..lol. course,anything is better then what I write..lol. j/k. but very good!

nellypants · 16th Jan 04

amazing!! I loved it! congrats

Gothsicle · 16th Jan 04

*sniff* sad

lynda · 16th Jan 04

that is so well written!

well done!

Leesa · 16th Jan 04

WHOA!! that is so awesome
I agree wit lynda, it's really well written.

Daisy · 19th Jan 04

wow that's really really good

Nikki · 19th Jan 04

That's great, I really didn't expect the unprotected sex bit, which just gave it more emphasis - well done

15th Jan 04	#1
portugeeqn Obsessed Nelly Fan Join Date: 19th Mar 02 Location: california Age: 30 Posts: 375	The doctor told me that I was sick death came to mind very quick Up to that point life was just great now it was a journey of unknown fate I became depressed told no one what I had I started to get weak and always so sad seeing my friends wonder what today they would wear Me wondering if this would be my last breath of air I realised what a fatal mistake I made in my past How life was just moving so incredibly fast It was minutes of pleasure to years of grief My body was being taken by a horrible thief It was time to share my secret with those who should know I didnt want my family nor friends to get it didnt want it to grow Unprotected sex with a guy I hardly knew Nothing can happen to me I believed was true Ok I wrote that years ago.I don't know how it came to me.But it's not about myself. __________________ Life can only be understood backwards, but must be lived forwards

15th Jan 04	#4
Erica shake it like a sugashaka Join Date: 7th Jul 03 Location: carribbian Age: 26 Posts: 5,078	very well done!! wow, that's better then what I write..lol. course,anything is better then what I write..lol. j/k. but very good! __________________ I want to live where soul meets body.And let the sun wrap its arms around me.

16th Jan 04	#5
nellypants Gold Member Join Date: 2nd Jan 03 Location: Sao Paulo, Brasil Posts: 1,641	amazing!! I loved it! congrats __________________ >>!MarianA!<< www.nelstar.cjb.net

16th Jan 04	#6
Gothsicle Rest in peace, love <3 Join Date: 25th Dec 02 Location: right here in her arms Age: 18 Posts: 2,928	sniff sad __________________ ^^click for the myfrickinspace

16th Jan 04	#7
lynda Super Mod - Music = Life Join Date: 19th Feb 02 Location: Sydney, Australia Age: 24 Posts: 7,732	that is so well written! well done! __________________ "Requesting so many tunes we devote tonight, this is DJ Nelstar, comin' at ya!

15th Jan 04	#2
Rebecca Platinum Member Join Date: 10th Aug 02 Location: Houston, TX Age: 72 Posts: 4,632	Sandy....that's deep....I'm glad it wasn't about u.

16th Jan 04	#8
Leesa is blood thirsty. Join Date: 22nd Mar 03 Location: Sydney Age: 19 Posts: 8,135	WHOA!! that is so awesome I agree wit lynda, it's really well written. __________________ Old skool Furtado represent. www.last.fm/user/angryprincess

19th Jan 04	#9
Daisy Bounce Bounce Bounce Join Date: 15th Sep 03 Location: new zealand Age: 19 Posts: 918	wow that's really really good __________________ I'm a part-time prophetess

19th Jan 04	#10
Nikki Old-skool 4 lyfe. <3 Join Date: 7th Nov 02 Location: Bayside. Age: 23 Posts: 16,682	That's great, I really didn't expect the unprotected sex bit, which just gave it more emphasis - well done __________________ Make me a mixtape that makes me yours; don't leave out Husker Du, put something on that The Cars did in 1982. It makes me yours. Last edited by Joey; 14th Feb 05 at 11:27.

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