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[FunkyFreshness]

I made this kinda on a whim....

Armed w/ knowledge and dignity
He's confidant he'd never fall to the adolescent fury
He keeps his distance
Not needing to validate his existence
With all the crazy things kids do

He's become the observant
learning all that he can
to offer his knowledge as a service
For those who wish to know more
or for those who want to get out

With all he knows how to do
he wants to change world
Hoping a movement will ensue

[AJCN]

let hope a movement will ensure! oh eu nao tenho limonada jejeje

[Rodrigo]

Very nice one... not in the metrics but in the content.

[FunkyFreshness]

metrics? Que es eso?

[Rodrigo]

El chiste es que tu poemilla me lleg? no tanto por la rima, sino por lo que dice.

Eso busco...

[FunkyFreshness]

oooo ya entiendo.

[masterdarth]

Very nice maribel.

[FunkyFreshness]

thanks....do you guys get the concept of it all?

[Rodrigo]

Well, I get the concept as I perceive it, don't know if you felt the same the moment you wrote it.