Song: Stars (Are Bright)

[Loosen Up]

Hey guys,

i wrote this song last year before i joined. But i never had a name for it. So then nelly released well sung her song "Stars" on tour so i changed the lyrics a bit and i ended up with this. It's the very first song i ever wrote so it's not WONDERFUL. But's its ok. Ok it's a pop ballad. I did have music laying around for it but i can't find it... damm.

ok here it is! enjoy!!!
Please when comment say exactly what i need to work on and what i did well cause i want to actually write good songs one day lol like cooby!!!

Verse One:

I woke up this morning
Feeling so blue
Until all of my thoughts drifted back to you
All of a sudden, my life had a point,
I didn't feel like crying, like I normally do,

Oh A no, no no, something had been revived in me,
Oh How I hope, hope, hope what that thing inside could be,
I'm sure I know, know, know exactly what it is,
& I know, know, know, you know exactly what it is,

Chorus:

The stars are bright, the timing so right
The timing so right to tell you my feelings are truth,
I love you,

I always have & always will,
No other could feel the way I do,
About you, yes, about you,

Verse Two:

Oh how I love you, how you love me,
& how together, we shall always be,
Lying here on this hill cradled in my arms you shall always be,
Always be,

Oh how I know, know, know this lvoe will last forever,
Oh how I hope, hope, hope ths love shall always be,
Oh how I'm sure, sure, sure this match was made in heaven,
Oh I know, know, know you will always love me,

Chorus: (x 1)

Bridge: (talked, not sung)

But lovin' goes 1 way baby,
It's a one way street,
But you decided to cut a corner,
Look where you've ended up,
Do I mean anything to you anymore?
Is there any point loving you anymore?
No.

Chorus (Break - Up Version) (x 3)

The stars were bright, the timing was right,
The timing so right, to tell you my feelings were true,
I loved you,

I always did, but never will,
I feel like a fool for feeling for you,
About you, yes, about you





Ok there you go i hope you all liked it!

[NannaFurtado]

I like it ;D

[Loosen Up]

yay! hey i havent talked to you on msn for a while have i? lol well is there anything specific you like about it?

[NannaFurtado]

Yeah we have talk..

I dont no :/ I only think that its a good song..

[Wo-Maneater]

i think it's really good i could never write things like this ^^ it's a pretty love song..were u in love?? or are u still??

[oswaldo]

yeah!!! this is song is genial!!! is cool....

[kat_4eva2]

wow Matt! i didnt realise you were so talented at song writing! this is an amazing song, i love especially the first verse its a really great way of introducing the whole theme of the rest of the song.
well done, love it

[DaanF]

I like it a lot. Most of the time when people post some lyrics here it's kinda difficult to imagine how the song would sound like, but with your lyrics it's almost like i hear the song playing in the back of my head while reading the words.
I also feel it's something Nelly could've written, the lyrics seem so simple and fresh, really cool.
I especially thought this part was great:

Originally Posted by Loosen Up

But lovin' goes 1 way baby,
It's a one way street,
But you decided to cut a corner,

I loved the 'you decided to cut a corner' line, very clever.

[NellyWood]

Great song, Bravo

[InTheShadows]

Haha Matt stars are blind arent they?

GOOD JOB THOUGH!

*clappppps*