Song: Our Home

[Cooby]

I still want to create new things in my songs, this song talks about concerning in the world around us, because there's no difference between your house and your planet, cuz in the end you live in the same place. Hope you like it.


Our Home

Some thieves entered in my house last year
They destroyed the flowers and windows
Took the little treasures and money there
I sit down and start to concern

Because it’s my home
It’s my home
It’s my home
And this is all

Some guys entered in my neighbourhood last month
They destroyed the walls and parks
Ruined the little treasures and beauty there
I sit down and start to concern

Because it’s my home
It’s my home
It’s my home
And this is all

Some narcos* entered in my city last week
They destroyed the youth and fairness
Stole the little treasures and spirits there
I sit down and start to concern

Because it’s my home
It’s my home
It’s my home
And this is all

Some politicians entered in my country last day
They destroyed our hope and faith
Disappeared their shame and our dreams die here
I sit down and start to concern

Because it’s my home
It’s my home
It’s my home
And this is all

Some bombs felt in my world today
They destroyed the love and heritage
Took away some lives and stories
And we who stay can’t just sit and cry

Because it’s our home
It’s our home
It’s our home
And this is all

And I don’t wanna know
What’s gonna happen tomorrow
This world needs pure love
Because this our home


*drug dealers

[Azul_56]

The only thing I always see in your songs, in fact lyrics... Is that they have too many verses!

This one has 5 verses and 5 choruses and what for me seems like a bridge (the last part)

I just wanted to point that, I´m nt saying they suck because of that....

I find your song very spiritual in its way! It´s like a therapy that you wanna make to the whole world...

Very enthusiastic!

[Cooby]

Haha, in this song, specially, I tried to make it a little tender and repetitive because it's like the chorus is a transition to another level about the problem the lyrics talk. That's why it has a lot of verses and the chorus is repeated five times. Most of my songs have around 4 verses, the chorus 3/4 times and a bridge, but this one is a bit different.

Thanks for the comments Manu

[Azul_56]

I know that! Yeah and I noticed the chorus was just a transition! But yeah, it´s oe of your best pieces!

And please don´t call me Manu, it sounds so girly, but hell, for you and your friends I´m gay so whatever!

xD

[Cooby]

^ Haha, oook, I won't call you Manu ever again sorry 'bout that x)

Thanks for the comments again

[Felo]

LMAO @ "Manu" hahah xDDD

ok, the message is great but I felt like there's no passion in the song... I don't know... it looks like too literal, there's no lines to decode

it almost looks like it was translated from Spanish... in Spanish, these would actually make a lot more sense, lol I hope you understand what I'm trying to say

Took away some lives and stories L O V E this line <3

[Cooby]

^ That's because I tried to make it more direct, this is the kind of song I want the message to reach the person instantly, because being more subjective wouldn't really work with a warning.

I have to say the song is in a slow happy tune, except for the verses that starts with "Some bombs felt in my world today"

Thanks for the comments