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Song: Once You Are Gone
I Wrote This Song To A Friend Who Will Be Leaving To Another State For College In About Two Months. After We Graduted From Highschool I Started College And He Started Working At Night. So We Couldn't Hang Out As Often. He Was My Best Friend Throught Highschool. Now He Decided To Go To College But Not In Town. I Know It Is For His Best. But He Is Like My Only Friend. Well, I Have Other Friends. But He Is The Only One That I Fear To Lose. I Tried Convincing Him In Staying In Town And Going To College Here. But He Wants To Leave. So Now He Is Leaving. And It Sucks. lol.
Once You Are Gone I still cant believe, That you are going to leave, Can't get it in my mind, Unable to put you behind. We all have our own voices, So we make our own choices, Yours, I couldn't detect, But it is something I must respect. No one to tell, That I am happy. No one to tell, When I am sad. Who is there to tell? Once you are gone. Changing your mind didn't work. Your hunger to leave has made you gone berserk. Our lives we must continue, Even if it doesn't include you. No one to tell, That I am happy. No one to tell, When I am sad. Who is there to tell? Once you are gone. You are gone, So far away, Beyond the dawn, Across the skyway, Who do I look upon? Am I going to be okay? No one to tell, That I am happy. No one to tell, When I am sad. Who is there to tell? Once you are gone. |
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Re: Song: Once You Are Gone
oh thats good, i might steal it its that good, i really lke the chorus and im sort of getting a tune.... its hard to get a tune with no way to tell us how
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Try To Explode!
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Re: Song: Once You Are Gone
I can feel a tune too, it's marvelous Ray... I swear this is the song I've liked the most!
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You got all my respect for this Ray! It's just awesome... probably my favorite song ever written by an amateur Can't even believe it, congratulations! |
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Re: Song: Once You Are Gone
Cool song!.... Really cool, man it?s so amazing the way this song touched me! I lost a friend in the easter (cuz he died), and this is like all the things I wanted to say him and I couldn?t!
I really like it! Congratulations! Love all the song! |
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Re: Song: Once You Are Gone
such a nice song ! thnks for share
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Re: Song: Once You Are Gone
OMG OMG! ! ! My Friend Is Not Leaving Anymore!
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Re: Song: Once You Are Gone
I love the first part that Cooby loves! That's incredible!!
And that's even better that your friend isn't leaving anymore! How come he's staying? |
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Try To Explode!
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Re: Song: Once You Are Gone
Glad to know that Ray!
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Re: Song: Once You Are Gone
He Said He Had Too Many Things Here To Do. .And The School He Was Going To Was Too Much Money. 30,000 Dollars For Only Nine Months.
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