Song: Moving

[Cooby]

I think you'll know what's this song about by just reading it... hope you like it!

Moving

Everybody knows that you hurt me a lot
Everybody knows that you made me cry a lot
But nobody knows how deep that was

Nobody knows that we lived the most beautiful moments
Nobody knows that we lived the most horrible moments
But everybody knows that I loved you to death

I?m hurt, you didn?t care
I cried, you laughed
I craved, you flew away
Now you say you?re sorry
Is it the lack of attention?

And now you appear
Begging for my lips
Kneeing down in front of me
And now you appear
Begging for me!
Bow down and cry for me!
Because now I?m moving

Now that I?m moving?

I have to admit that I?m kinda moved
I must admit that I?m kinda touched
But I can?t let your hands caress me again

Now I heard that you cried for me
Now I heard you said you love me
But I can?t trust you anymore

You?re hurt, did I care?
You cried, did I laugh?
You craved, did I fly away?
Now I say I?m sorry
Is it the lack of your attention?

And now I appear
Begging for your lips
Kneeing down in front of you
And I appear
Begging for you!
I bow down and cry for you!
But now you?re moving
(I need you) Now that you?re moving

I only want you when I can?t have you
You only want me when you can?t have me
I only need you when I cry
You only need me when you cry

We?re hurt, we didn?t care?
We cried, we laughed?
We craved, we flew away?
We are sorry?
Now say that you love me?

But we?re moving? moving?

But we?re moving?
But we?re moving?
But we?re moving?
But we?re moving?

And now you appear
Begging for my lips
Kneeing down in front of me
And now you appear
Begging for me!
Bow down and cry for me!
Because now I?m moving
(You need me) Now that I?m moving

And now I appear
Begging for your lips
Kneeing down in front of you
And I appear
Begging for you!
I bow down and cry for you!
But now you?re moving
(I need you) Now that you?re moving

You looked for me just when I was moving
I ran behind you just when you moved!

I regret and eat all my words?
I?m stoned and everybody?s moving
Everybody?s moving

Let?s see what happens? because again? I?m moving

[MissingOrigin]

how often do you write songs?
all the songs you have posted are really good.
your majoring in writing arent you?
Kudos.

[Leesa]

JUAN
I
LOVE
THIS
SONG
SO
MUCH.

Great contrast between your situations! How at first the person is one who is the perpatrator of your heartbreak, when then in turn you are the one who is the perpatrator! And then I love it how it just comes together and pretty much combines you although at the same time it spaces you and breaks everything apart. It's beautiful.

This is my favourite stanza:

And now you appear
Begging for my lips
Kneeing down in front of me
And now you appear
Begging for me!
Bow down and cry for me!
Because now I’m moving

Incredible. 5million kudos plus hugs and kisses. Would love to hear the musical composition of this song. It'd be great.

[Emma]

Coobs thats Beautiful

Im Repping you boo

[Cooby]

Thank you so much my friends

Ray, yep, I'll mayor in lit.erature

Leesa!!! Thank you so much, those are one of the most beautiful opinions I've heard about my work Thank you so much!!

And Emma, I didn't receive rep Maybe there's a rep limitation Buh... but I almost get my fourth square

[billerr]

Juan, I cant believe how much those lyrics touched me.... I mean I actually visualised the situations in front of me.

You know, and no flattering intended, you are really skilled not only in coming up with great, interesting situations in your songs, but also in the way you convey them with your words. I agree with Leesa, it would make a wonderful song. Keep givin' us those lyrics, man!

[Cooby]

Thank you Biller!! You rock!!

I'll work in more songs soon, I wrote a new couple of songs this week, but they're not -so deep- they're more kinda... funny or funky Maybe I'll post them, but I may destroy my new writer reputation

[kat_4eva2]

ah that is a wkd song! i love it cooby, its like so....deep, yer

you're so good at writing lyrics, i agree with everyone above me, all the songs you've posted have been awesome

and im sure the rest are great too, i think your song writer reputation is way too big to be broken now, lol

ahh love it, im like trying to come up with a tune in my big weird head so i can sing it! lol

[Cooby]

^ Aww, thank you so much Kat, that was sweet

[RussianSasha]

that would be cool if you could record it and put it one lik eyoutube or something so we could listen lol but ya awesome job,got talent!