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hey I was bored so I tried to make a good song
hope you like it: Dreaming: 1 cold and dark, rain is falling just sit in bed, nothing to say, only looking forward don't know what to do, calling a friend, nobody is at home, 'chatting' with the mobile phone, someone you like, but he doesn't like you, that's sad to know, feeling angry and alone, nobody is at home Ref: just sit there and wanting him here, feeling and reaching him, but his heart is not with yours, dreaming your dream, but not his, he's just away and thinks of everything, but for sure not on you 2 Try to forget him, but think every second on him then you are first to know he has a girlfriend, but that's not you seeing him lucky and kissing her on the streets, and after a year, you forgot him, he's here again, but alone seeing a chance but cannot catch it he's away on party and you can see him but from a long distance Ref 3 For sure, all the time you sit infront of the mirror and think of getting the face his girlfriend has to have , you are beautiful, but not for him, let of your heart fall and go another way just sit there and wanting him here, feeling and reaching him, it's nonsence, let off of him, it's just a dream - come back to reality and do not catch him witch your eyes Ref...
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that was lovely ..........
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yeah, really great!
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thanks!! I will write another one!
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Wow It's so nice
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really awesome, can't wait to check the new things you write!
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also I wrote this for thellys party song number 2
let's try Party 2 1 Let?s party! Hey, come on, stand up, say no-oh yes I drank t?il I t?il I was full And now I dance with all my cruel I am so full, that?s not so good The boys are coming over Ref: Party?s just begun, Party?s just begun, Party?s just begun, Party?s just begun 2 Hey let?s rock! I went to wash my face, it?s blue, somebody took my shoes over me, I guess I won?t be awake the next day, And will sleep till all is away But now it?s party- time, eh I will rime again On the stage I nipped my glass and, Drank till I was full I drank till I was full, I drank till I was full, Now let?s rock and the other make it top! Ref: 3 My head goes up, up, up and down It?s getting hot, Let?s get on out! Ref 2x
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please tell me if you like it, then I will write another song!!
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so if you don't replay the song seems to be not very good.....
so here is another one.. Bored?? 1 Sitting infront of the TV, Watching nonsence and zapping from VIVA to MTV Then switching the radio on, For some other shit , Suddenly this hip- hop style song, Hey, turn on louder, stay up and start dancing, Jumping and singin- STOP Ref: Hey, hey, yep so come on, please somebody have fun with me! It?s boring, don?t know what to do, so Wow, wow do this or do that Pic up the phone and call a friend, Make a party and it gets hot, hot so do?. 2 No fun to work and to learn I get up and put some nice clothes on, Get out of the house, So get out and walk up the streets, Let?s meet some people, have a drink with them, Then I hear this good song again on the radio, Hey get up have fun!! Let?s dance with someone Ref: 3 Soo don?t know what to do, just take a good pencil And a notebook, And I write this down and?.so Wait and you will see? After 2 years turn on the radio There?s this song Some new stuff to hear again? Ref 2x Don?t think of it, just do it And only make that what makes sence Ref
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