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Old 27th Apr 07   #1
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Song: Lied

One song I wrote some years ago and I wanted to share with you guys!

Hope you like it!

It?s called Lie
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Lie:


I?m so tired of running
I?m so tired of waiting
I?m getting lost between the people
That always are left behind
I tried so hard not to cry
I tried so hard to make you smile
It seemed like nothing I did was good for you
It seemed like I was bothering you

When did our love started failing?


Chorus:
I lie to you when I?m smiling
I lie to you when I?m breathing
I lie to you when I said you: My heart stills beating
I lie to you when you come closer and I say you:
Please go away, I don?t want you here
And I keep my mind missing you


I found out that I can?t do this anymore
I realised that you?re my whole life
I found out I can?t live without you
I realised I can?t be lying for so long
I?ve been looking for a reason
I?ve trying to understand
For a reason to believe
Why do I love you so much?


When did our love started failing?

Chorus


I want someone to set me free
I want someone to fill the hole you left when you ran away
I want someone to make feel in the clouds
I want someone who loves me in a real and deep way
I want someone to make my heart starts beating again
I want someone to doze my desires of having you now
I want someone to make me sleep for an eternity
I want someone who loves me in a real and deep way

When did our love started failing?


Chorus

When did our love started failing?
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It?s not a happy song, is a song for those who are in love with someone and that person doesn?t show you any feeling.

I?ll wait for your critics
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Old 27th Apr 07   #2
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Re: Song: Lied

omg I love it... I've written something like that, but more in a crappy way LOL I'm not a poet

besides some time errors, the song is awesome xD good job
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Old 29th Apr 07   #3
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oh i like it but its no where near as good as any of my songs *COUGH* my songs suck compared to this bravo!
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Old 29th Apr 07   #4
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Re: Song: Lied

Yeah Felo i found some times errors!

I?m trying to fix it! The name is also bad! The name is Lie, not Lied!

Thanks anyway!!!

Fuck! I can?t edit that post now!

So here are the fixed Lyrics!! Those errors happened when I was writing it in the Pc! jejejeje

Lie:


I?m so tired of running
I?m so tired of waiting
I?m getting lost between the people
That is always left behind
I tried so hard not to cry
I tried so hard to make you smile
It seemed like nothing I used to do was good for you
It seemed like I was bothering you

When did our love started failing?


Chorus:
I lie to you when I?m smiling
I lie to you when I?m breathing
I lie to you when I say you: My heart stills beating
I lie to you when you come closer and I tell you:
Please go away, I don?t want you here
And I keep my mind missing you


I found out that I can?t do this anymore
I realised that you?re my whole life
I found out I can?t live without you
I realised I can?t be lying for so long
I?ve been looking for a reason
I?ve trying to understand
For a reason to believe
Why do I love you so much?


When did our love started failing?

Chorus


I want someone to set me free
I want someone to fill the hole you left when you ran away
I want someone to make feel in the clouds
I want someone who loves me in a real and deep way
I want someone to make my heart starts beating again
I want someone to doze my desires of having you now
I want someone to make me sleep for an eternity
I want someone who loves me in a real and deep way

When did our love started failing?


Chorus

When did our love started failing?
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Old 30th Apr 07   #5
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Re: Song: Lied

I knew it ! You are the right person to sing this so !!! if u release this song i d to download
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Re: Song: Lied

I?d just take it, like one poor peruvian jealous of my success, trying to make me feel bad, but he can?t!

You?d better SHUT UP instead of showing you stupidity around!
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Re: Song: Lied

I''m not jealous lol !! On the other way i really like this song ^^ but plz dont talk about that i am poor !! lol that s not possible; By for your side i dont know what to say
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Re: Song: Lied

Please Jos?, think before writing here!!

I didn?t get anything of what you were trying to say to me!
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Re: Song: Lied

Go and learn some english

Ps: God !! i got REP for the another post !! yay !
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Re: Song: Lied

Yay Jos? I guess that?s why I need!

Some clasees given by Peruvians, I guess your official language is English!

Thanks Jos?! I appreciate your help!
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