Song: Drunk

[Cooby]

Ok, long time I hadn't posted a song, and... this one is pretty different of what I use to write, I like it, no, I love it, mystifies me the sound is very tropical but... slow and smooth at the same time, a bit like Nelly's song Party. Hope you like it, the lyrics are somewhat clear



Drunk

The bongos sound as the night welcomes the man
The crickets cry as he drinks the nectar of the lies

Oh, he’s drinking it
Oh, he’s drinking it
Oh my God he’s drinking it

The slutty bitches intensify her eyes, they’re so bright
Because he’s drunk, slip the tongue, they will attack

Oh, he’s drinking it
Oh, he’s drinking it
Oh my God he’s drinking it, drinking it, drinking it

Oh, what could I do? She was so in
Oh, what I should have done with all the love in my hands?
Oh, how could I find something lost in this spinning mind?

Drink it, drink it, drink it, la-la-la
Drink it, drink it, drink it, la-la-la-la-la-la!

Oh, he’s drinking it
Oh, he’s drinking it
Oh my God he’s drinking it, drinking it, drinking it
Oh my… he’s drinking it

The stars tell me that I should stop him now before it’s too late
Before it’s too late, before it’s late, it’s too late

But even while he’s drunk, he keeps drinking it, he’s drinking it
Oh my God he’s drinking it.

His car started to cry, the crickets started to laugh
The front lights shinned crazy in a mad spiral
Cuz’ his car’s wheels started to skid down and scream high

Ah minute of silence please, the man just died
What the hell!? Give him another beer
He may be a ghost now but he still…

He’s drinking it; he’s drinking it, drinking it

…

Now I’m here… depressed… drunk… talking to the crickets and my ghost

Bongo… shut the fuck up

[MissingOrigin]

I Like It. .It Kinda Made Me Laugh. LOL. .Yeah. It Is Different Than What You Usually Write. .But You Are Really Random With What You Write Though. Good Job. I Can Totally See A PARTY Type Of Beat To It.

[Cooby]

^ Thanks Ray! Glad you liked!

And yeah, I'm currently moving in a lot of new directions, I love to see what happens with some experimental songs, makes me discover things of me I didn't even know. I love lyrics diversity, just like Nelly does!

[taylor]

as i was reading i was singing it in my head with a "party" like sound, and i liked it! ha ha so silly...

but yes this is a different direction from what i have previously read of yours, but i think this is very good writing, and its important to experiment with different styles. lyrically the thing i like best is how there is a lot of repetition. i know repetition is sometimes not liked that much, but i think it works well with the theme of this song (drunk wasted etc).
"oh he's drinking it
oh he's drinking it
oh my God he's drinking it."
this repetition creates a overall vibe that works well with your themes...

WOO COOBY! good job!

[Cooby]

Glad you like it Tayloo! Thanks a lot for the comments, you do understand me I also like repetitions in some songs, they work very well with The Cranberries and Dolores O'Riordan

[Azul_56]

Cool song man!

I´d like to read a song´s letter from you, talking about your similarity with penguins... That´d REALLY make laugh...

[Cooby]

^ Hahaha, hey, that's a really good idea! I may do it soon.