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Try To Explode!
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Ok... this is one of the stronger songs I've ever written in my opinion... the subject is really serious... it talks about a guy (or girl) who thinks has AIDS, he/she discovered that one partner of one-night had the virus and it's really afraid of being infected... I... I'm even shocked, I can't believe I wrote this, I got so deep in the feeling and I'm really scared right now, I'm serious, I may have to talk with all the partners I've had (Well, just 2) or get some analysis.
Guys, I'm serious, protect yourselves, I'd change a lot of things I did yesterday, I'm so freaked right now. Oh, and I couldn't find another title for the song... Dread Oh God, I regret I didn?t want to get this far Oh my Lord, I give myself to you My fate is in your hands I?d like to go to the past and rectify all I did I know I?ve forgotten you for a long time But you appeared like a candle in the dark Just now, when I?m scared, facing it? I feel the demons rushing through my veins Destroying all my defenses, my white shields God, I pray it?s only in my head, my darkest imagination The demon of fear? taking over all of my thoughts. I can?t believe, this would happen to me I felt so invulnerable, immune, exempt Free of all the dangers of the passion But I think it happened Accidents may happen? Maybe it?s just paranoia, but my skin is looking odd Maybe I?m just crazy, but I find it hard to breath Maybe it?s just schizophrenia, but my body keeps shaking Maybe I?m just losing my mind, or my life? I feel the demons rushing through my veins Destroying all my defenses, my white shields God, I pray it?s only in my head, my darkest imagination The demon of fear? taking over all of my thoughts. Analysis, I?m too scared to receive a yes as an answer What would I do? What would I do? Oh, panic? look what you?ve done to me! I dread to see the light, will I stay? I feel the demons rushing through my veins Destroying all my defenses, my white shields God, I pray it?s only in my head, my darkest imagination The demon of fear? taking over all of my thoughts. Heaven?s door, heaven?s door Your voice, your voice Give me an answer Vanish the demons Take me higher, make everything disappear <Hear beating each time stronger until it stops with a strong eco> |
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Re: Song: Dread
ok this is a stronger song well its deep lol, ok your scaring me lol no but good song, i wish i could write songs like these *sobs* lol no seriously good song..
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Location: USA
Age: 21
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Re: Song: Dread
Not Many Songs Are Written About This Subject, Well At Least I Haven't Heard That Many. I Like This Song, LmAo, I LIke All Your Songs. Buen Trabajo Juan.
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Drops of Jupiter
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Re: Song: Dread
whoa
very impressive song! really makes you think more strongly about the whole subjecti think its great that you've written about this, and done it very wel too, theres not many who could pull that off! well done coobs ![]()
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Its Lisa B*tch!
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Re: Song: Dread
wow!
I love this one Coobs. its even better then that die die die song ![]() haha sireusly ,keep this up!
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hullo again!
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Re: Song: Dread
Very good song Coobs! The mind-life play in that verse is awesome! And the words are strong (...my lord...demons...) which gives a ....mmm....dreadful
feel to the song. Nice nice nice! ![]() |
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