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Old 10th Apr 07   #1
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Post Song: Dread

Ok... this is one of the stronger songs I've ever written in my opinion... the subject is really serious... it talks about a guy (or girl) who thinks has AIDS, he/she discovered that one partner of one-night had the virus and it's really afraid of being infected... I... I'm even shocked, I can't believe I wrote this, I got so deep in the feeling and I'm really scared right now, I'm serious, I may have to talk with all the partners I've had (Well, just 2) or get some analysis.

Guys, I'm serious, protect yourselves, I'd change a lot of things I did yesterday, I'm so freaked right now.

Oh, and I couldn't find another title for the song...


Dread

Oh God, I regret
I didn?t want to get this far
Oh my Lord, I give myself to you
My fate is in your hands

I?d like to go to the past and rectify all I did
I know I?ve forgotten you for a long time
But you appeared like a candle in the dark
Just now, when I?m scared, facing it?

I feel the demons rushing through my veins
Destroying all my defenses, my white shields
God, I pray it?s only in my head, my darkest imagination
The demon of fear? taking over all of my thoughts.

I can?t believe, this would happen to me
I felt so invulnerable, immune, exempt
Free of all the dangers of the passion
But I think it happened
Accidents may happen?

Maybe it?s just paranoia, but my skin is looking odd
Maybe I?m just crazy, but I find it hard to breath
Maybe it?s just schizophrenia, but my body keeps shaking
Maybe I?m just losing my mind, or my life?

I feel the demons rushing through my veins
Destroying all my defenses, my white shields
God, I pray it?s only in my head, my darkest imagination
The demon of fear? taking over all of my thoughts.

Analysis, I?m too scared to receive a yes as an answer
What would I do? What would I do?
Oh, panic? look what you?ve done to me!
I dread to see the light, will I stay?

I feel the demons rushing through my veins
Destroying all my defenses, my white shields
God, I pray it?s only in my head, my darkest imagination
The demon of fear? taking over all of my thoughts.

Heaven?s door, heaven?s door
Your voice, your voice
Give me an answer
Vanish the demons

Take me higher, make everything disappear

<Hear beating each time stronger until it stops with a strong eco>
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Old 10th Apr 07   #2
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Re: Song: Dread

ok this is a stronger song well its deep lol, ok your scaring me lol no but good song, i wish i could write songs like these *sobs* lol no seriously good song..
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Old 11th Apr 07   #3
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...................this is really deep and emotional , this is, i think the best song you have written so far , good job!!
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Re: Song: Dread

Not Many Songs Are Written About This Subject, Well At Least I Haven't Heard That Many. I Like This Song, LmAo, I LIke All Your Songs. Buen Trabajo Juan.
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Re: Song: Dread

whoa very impressive song! really makes you think more strongly about the whole subject

i think its great that you've written about this, and done it very wel too, theres not many who could pull that off! well done coobs
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Re: Song: Dread

wow!

I love this one Coobs. its even better then that die die die song

haha sireusly ,keep this up!
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Re: Song: Dread

Very good song Coobs! The mind-life play in that verse is awesome! And the words are strong (...my lord...demons...) which gives a ....mmm....dreadful feel to the song. Nice nice nice!
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