Song: The Darkest Tale

[Cooby]

lmao! I was going to read Da Vinci Code when I found this old song in the shelf... haha, I wrote it three months ago, and I was betrayed and ditched when I wrote it, so it has a lot of hate... but it's like... soft hate


The Darkest Tale

You… lost me
I was looking afraid inside the darkest woods
I was afraid, but I didn’t desist and could escape from that forest
But took with me a book

With the darkest tale
That I’m going to write
You’ll never see what's inside
You’ll live in the darkness
With the pain as your fate
I’m going to write, your darkest tale

I’ll transform your sky in the hardest floor
You… surely won’t die
You’ll enjoy the pain as much I enjoyed your lie

The darkest tale
I’m going to write
You’ll never see what's inside
You’ll live in the darkness
With the pain in as your fate
I’m going to write, your darkest tale

I’ve been in the darkest tale
But I took a little piece
And I’m going to rewrite it
In the happiest side of you

I lived in the night
I lived in the night
Where you’ll be begging for forgiveness

The darkest tale
I’m going to write
You’ll never see what's inside
You’ll live in the darkness
And the pain will cover your face!
I’m going to write, your darkest tale!

And you’re not going to escape
You won’t escape
You won’t escape
Even if you crawl
You won’t escape
Don’t cry baby, you can’t escape


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Hope you like it

[MissingOrigin]

KUDOS.
This song is awesome. I wish there was music to it. I dont know what type of music you all image but i imagen an organ with an electric guitar. lol, im already singing it.
instead of What is inside, it should be (in my opinion) What's inside.

[Cooby]

^ Thank you so much

And yeah, I thought this song with Organ and Electric Guitar it's a heavy dark rock song, not yet metal, though the last chorus is kinda hardcore

I changed the "what is" to "what's"

Thanks again Ray!

[Leesa]

Reow. That's dark and deeeeep. Definitely an aftermath song of a bad breakup. Good work, Juan!

'I'm going to write your darkest tale.'

OUCH!!! <3

[kat_4eva2]

oooo thats a great song!!! kinda creepy but in a good way if yknow what i mean??? lol

well done Cooby you have a real talent for writing songs

[Emma]

cooby thats truely amazing

i wish i had the energy to write something so meaningful like that

[Cooby]

Awwww!! Thank you so much for all your comments they're so appreciated!!

Love you all!