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Old 4th Nov 07   #1
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She's growing up

This is a little poem I made for a friend, since she's growing up, in fact not in the height thing, but in her soul, so she's forgetting her old friends....

She's growing Up

Since I watched you today
I realised that our yesterday was never real
You were never here
And now all it's lost
You and me here again
Together in our love
Kiss me, it's just a miracle
Can't you see?
Give me now a sign
I wanna love for the rest of my life
Don't hurt my illusions
I give you my joy then
And I'll love you without thinking

So, you're growing up?
You know what can you do with that?
We were meant to be
Can't you see?
Lead me to the land of fake dreams
Where our love can again be real
So my pain wouldn't grow deeper as it's happening now
I could love you until the sea is dry
Would that make a difference?
All the world changed its colours
Of thinking of you, I have decided something
I cannot stand this anymore
I don't care what's happening now

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It's finished now, it's kinda weird in fact, really weird, as everything I do jejejeje

I just put my feelings together in one poem and that's the result
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Old 5th Nov 07   #2
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Re: She's growing up

it's great xD
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Re: She's growing up

omg, Vittorio it's really good!


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Thanks!
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Re: She's growing up

Really nice poem Vittorio!!!
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its a great poem
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Whoa Vittorio!
Its really great!!
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Re: She's growing up

wow vittorio

i really like it it's different then the usual poems

good work !
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Re: She's growing up

wow that poems really good
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Re: She's growing up

well done vittorio... i really like ur poem, it's very deep and someting touching too... it's always good when we express our feelings in a piece of paper and writting poems like yours...

you seem to be a creative guy... and i know how it is when someone who is or who was special for us, is starting to act to us in a different way..it seems some people become rich and then they forget those people who were their real friends...

like it... muy bien hecho
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