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She's growing up
This is a little poem I made for a friend, since she's growing up, in fact not in the height thing, but in her soul, so she's forgetting her old friends....
She's growing Up Since I watched you today I realised that our yesterday was never real You were never here And now all it's lost You and me here again Together in our love Kiss me, it's just a miracle Can't you see? Give me now a sign I wanna love for the rest of my life Don't hurt my illusions I give you my joy then And I'll love you without thinking So, you're growing up? You know what can you do with that? We were meant to be Can't you see? Lead me to the land of fake dreams Where our love can again be real So my pain wouldn't grow deeper as it's happening now I could love you until the sea is dry Would that make a difference? All the world changed its colours Of thinking of you, I have decided something I cannot stand this anymore I don't care what's happening now --------- It's finished now, it's kinda weird in fact, really weird, as everything I do jejejeje I just put my feelings together in one poem and that's the result |
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Re: She's growing up
it's great xD
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Re: She's growing up
omg, Vittorio it's really good!
You must spread some Reputation around before giving it to Papa Cumbaya again.
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Re: She's growing up
Thanks!
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Serj and Nelly Rules!!!
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Re: She's growing up
Really nice poem Vittorio!!!
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Re: She's growing up
its a great poem
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Nelly, the queen of music
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Re: She's growing up
Whoa Vittorio!
Its really great!!
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Location: Switzerland/Italy
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Re: She's growing up
wow vittorio
i really like it it's different then the usual poems ![]() good work !
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Re: She's growing up
wow that poems really good
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Re: She's growing up
well done vittorio... i really like ur poem, it's very deep and someting touching too... it's always good when we express our feelings in a piece of paper and writting poems like yours...
you seem to be a creative guy... and i know how it is when someone who is or who was special for us, is starting to act to us in a different way..it seems some people become rich and then they forget those people who were their real friends... like it... muy bien hecho ![]() |
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