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Old 29th Oct 06   #1
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Shattered Heart


You have shattered my heart into a millions pieces.
Pieces I must pick up and carry with me.
Carry them until I come across someone.
Someone who is able to put them back together.
Together the same way they were before you shattered my heart with your words.
How can you do this to me?

I could not take control
So you took my soul
Ripped it apart
And left me with a shattered heart
I know those weren't your intentions
But I have only one question.
Why couldn't you be mine?

Words can be very powerful and hurtful.
Especially when you use them to tell the one who loves you you've found love with someone else.
These words enter our veins like poison.
Then quickly transfers into our heart
Pain develops and slowly kills us.
How can you do this to me?

I could not take control
So you took my soul
Ripped it apart
And left me with a shattered heart
I know those weren't your intentions
But I have only one question.
Why couldn't you be mine?

What hurts me most is that our lips never came across.
From now on you'll be like my mothers expensive crystal.
"I can look, but I can't touch."

I could not take control
So you took my soul
Ripped it apart
And left me with a shattered heart
I know those weren't your intentions
But I have only one question.
Why couldn't you be mine?

Why couldn't you be mine?
Why couldn't you be mine?
Why couldn't you be mine?
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Old 29th Oct 06   #2
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Re: Shattered Heart (Song)

wow Ray that is a gorgeous song!
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Old 30th Oct 06   #3
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Re: Shattered Heart (Song)

Aww Ray, did things not work out..? I'm sorry if that's the case. The song is beautiful.

This part got me good:
Words can be very powerful and hurtful.
Especially when you use them to tell the one who loves you you've found love with someone else.
These words enter our veins like poison.
Then quickly transfers into our heart
Pain develops and slowly kills us.
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Re: Shattered Heart (Song)

I hope that's not a true story...but I think it is. It's a very strong poem, feels very honest, and simple, I agree with that part with Leesa. I know it's of little consolation, but essentially it is those saddest moments in life that makes us truly understand it...think of In God's Hands for example, with you it's certainly generated a beautiful poem, or song as you say. In addition to that I have seen some of your photos in the threads, and I thought you were pretty like that she'd like you too...you seem like a very sweet and profound guy, and I'm sure you'll find someone eventually, but up until then, why not enjoy the creativity and art of pain?
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Yeah, just hope it'snot real. Really beautiful.
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Thanks for your comments. Yes, its real.
I am dealing with pain right now. But I must move on.
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