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Old 17th Jan 04   #1
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The road she compromised part 3

The girl rose from her spot by the water, she looked around at the huge forest. It seems like some kinda fantasy forest she thought. She saw many paths lay a skew in front of her. She turned around and looked behind her and saw there yet more paths that were leading off somewhere. The only path that was blocked was the one that lead behind the giant waterfall.

Then she saw another one. Leading to a place somewheres dark. So many decisions she thought. So, she walked towards the dark path thinking it might lead to an exit. Then she stopped. She saw this shimmering wall. She put her hand to feel it, it was warm to the touch. She put her hands up to the wall, leaned close and tried to get a closer look what lead down that path.

?you won't find anything there miss. That?s a path to the past. You already know that you can't change it.?

She whirled around, her silk dress flowing in harmony with the gliding breeze thatwas there when she span. She saw this person before her. But couldn?t distinguish what he looked like. He was wearing a dark cloak. It covered his face and was gently set onto the rest of him. ?who are you? And how do I get out of this place??

he turned away and started to walk away.?you can't get out of here.every path has a meaning. Every path has a different place at the end of it.? He stopped walking, turned around to face her.? You have to chose which path you want to take. It is like the decisions you make in life. There may be a time you take a path,thinking that it is the right one,walking through it,you may see amasing things, but I must warn you, not all paths lead to a good life.some may lose their beauty and fade,thus dragging you with it. But on the other hand, a path may take you to see the extravagance of the world. The beauty that it all holds. The choice is yours. There?s no right or wrong path. it's all about how you view it, and how you learn from it.? With that he slipped down the path that lead behind the waterfall.

?hey!..where you going?? the girl she stood there, realising he was gone. She looked at all the paths, that lay before her. She knew she had to decide a path, but which one?
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I'd take the....errr.......left path...lol
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good pick.

hmm..I think this whole story collection is quite good. I might make the ending soon.
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where could I find the 1st 2 parts of the story?
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oh! in..member's area.. um..maybe I'll get joey to put them in here.
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that's top..love to see the ending



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