the poem by sofiafan

[sofiafan]

give me your heart you're beauty your love,
the heavenly white son of a dove,
give me your responcability your power and strength,
the bonds that brang us together on the near exit park bench,
give me your will your millions your wealth,
so we can live happy from birth till death,
give me your sorrow your sadness and don't forget your anger,
give me the materials so we can build a heart shaped hanger,
give your happiness your speech your joy,
so you won't be a pain,bugging and annoy,
give a happy ending to my poem from me to you,
so you can share your abilities and your wishes that will come true.

4 people who don't belive I wright my own poems,I do.

pleez tell me what you think of my poems...and this 1

[SeiKetsu]

oh ! sofia very good !
ps: hellas

[Nikki]

Originally Posted by sofiafan

4 people who don't belive I wright my own poems,I do.

Who suggested that you don't write your own poems?

[Silvy]

no idea, who said that sofia?

[sofiafan]

well cause I write a lot of poems and I would of thought that you think I coppied them 4rom a book...but I don't...I'm just talented...like nfpa,hehe and maybe some other people 2.

[kimono]

hello sofiafan,(I'm sofiafan but with a different name) sneaky eh!

I just want 2 say I'm sofiafan aswell I chose 2 be 2 people...sofiafan and kimono so you can speak 2 kimono but really your speaking 2 sofiafan..I'm very cheaky.hehe
my name is sofia my screen names are sofiafan and kimono.

[Nikki]

I'm sorry, but that's dumb + pointless, please stick to one screen name so we know who is posting. It's not sneaky, it's juvenile. You said that you wanted people to get to know you, then let us, how can we when we don't know who we're talking to? Thanks, no offence meant

[kimono]

well I'm sticking to me and who do u think your speaking to a 20 year old well look I'm 11 okay yes,I'm young but I still love nelly as much through my short years.as any of you okay,

[Nikki]

Nobody even remarked on how much you "love" Nelly. Who do I think I'm speaking to? Well, I don't know that was my point. A 20 year old? I highly doubt it + so you're 11, well that's no biggie, although I still don't see why you had to create a new account, couldn't you have just asked Joey to change the name on your sofiafan one + change your avatar since you said that was all you were unhappy about?

[Deep137]

Originally Posted by kimono

well I'm sticking to me and who do u think your speaking to a 20 year old well look I'm 11 okay yes,I'm young but I still love nelly as much through my short years.as any of you okay,

your age has nothing to do with anything that was discussed here . . .