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Your in Bam world now...
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Here is my poem, which I wrote when I was really close with one of my male friends from school, and I thought it was going somewhere, but it ended, I was so upset that I wrote this poem to express my feelings at the time, so I hoep you like...
I see you standing there, I sit here and I stare, I can't help feeling something, My heart just won't stop thumping. You then came over here, I start to feel the fear, This feeling I can't bear, As into my eyes, you begin to stare. What came next was a surprise, As I stare back into your eyes, What happened next was such bliss, As we began to kiss. I thought it meant something, But to you it meant nothing, Into your eyes I began to stare, But the magic is no longer there.
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hey same as my title... but a very,very good poem I loved it.
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Your in Bam world now...
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Re: {Poem:}Love hurts...
thanks, glad you liked it, i am getting more into my poetry again now
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Re: {Poem:}Love hurts...
It's so nice. Very good !
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i eat red carpet
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Re: {Poem:}Love hurts...
very good
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Your in Bam world now...
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Re: {Poem:}Love hurts...
thanks, its ironic, something that just happened to me, relates with it!
its like Deja Vu... ![]()
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