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Old 13th Dec 04   #1
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Here is my poem, which I wrote when I was really close with one of my male friends from school, and I thought it was going somewhere, but it ended, I was so upset that I wrote this poem to express my feelings at the time, so I hoep you like...

I see you standing there,
I sit here and I stare,
I can't help feeling something,
My heart just won't stop thumping.

You then came over here,
I start to feel the fear,
This feeling I can't bear,
As into my eyes, you begin to stare.

What came next was a surprise,
As I stare back into your eyes,
What happened next was such bliss,
As we began to kiss.

I thought it meant something,
But to you it meant nothing,
Into your eyes I began to stare,
But the magic is no longer there.
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hey same as my title... but a very,very good poem I loved it.
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Re: {Poem:}Love hurts...

thanks, glad you liked it, i am getting more into my poetry again now
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It's so nice. Very good !
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Re: {Poem:}Love hurts...

thanks, its ironic, something that just happened to me, relates with it!
its like Deja Vu...

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