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Old 20th Aug 06   #1
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Old Poem

ok, i was tidying my room (believe it or not ) and i found this, i wrote it like a year ago or something, it reflected what i actually felt about someone at the time

but i dont know whether i finished it or not, i cant remember haha, ah well here it is anyway (btw its more random thoughts than a poem)

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i looked at you
something stirred inside
i wished that i could reach you
but i would tarnish your pride
i cant help these feelings
i know you dont feel the same
ive tried to force them away
but they just creep back into my heart
you're blank as a wall
but i read you like a book

Don't you see it?
no, of course you don't
you're so full of yourself
i'm one of you're admirers
but to you i am just filth

and yet i still love you
and yet i stay true
im sure theres something inside you
that nobody else sees
You looked at me once
just a glance in my direction
my heat lifted
my soul soured for just a moment
but then you glanced away
at the rest of the crowd

i feel so invisible
i feel so alone
nobody knows of the love i have for you
the love burning in my soul




thats it, lol, bear in mind i was only 15, reasonable attempt eh? lol
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"i looked at you
something stirred inside
i wished that i could reach you
but i would tarnish your pride"

I love that so much. It actually is really good. Pain, yearning and defiance. I like it how you're so into this person, but you understand how self-centred they are. It's great. Good work Kat!!
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i feel so invisible
i feel so alone
nobody knows of the love i have for you
the love burning in my soul
I relate to your poem sometimes i feel that way and the feeling of being invisible is hard to shake.
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thanks leesa

and i totally know what you mean masterdarth, damn it!
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Pretty pretty good Kat I like it!!

lol, you said "bear in mind i was only 15, reasonable attempt"
You had 15 just a couple weeks ago
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^lol, true, well id only just turned 15 at the time, haha
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