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Old 16th Apr 04   #11
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raaaaaaa THAT'S WHY I STOPPED THE STORY EARLY! haha.


bob and adia raided many many mcdonalds over the years. the even got a little crazy and went into burger king sometimes. but nothing ever happened between them just good friendship, and bob was completley okay with that...at least she tried to tell herself that. she secretley wished so strongly to tell adia how she felt, but their friendship was so intense, to lose it over telling her would be far far worse than never telling her at all. so the years went by. adia and bob did everything together. until one day, they were raiding a mcdonalds in cincinnati ohio, when adia met a man named terrance. they hit it off really well but terrance didn't seem to like bob and she hated him right off the bat. what is he doing with my adia?! she thought to herself. but then she realised the depressing truth. adia. adia was never hers and never would be. it's all my fault bob thought. if only I could tell her..but I can't...it's too risky. when wrong word and I'll be alone again. alone, like I was for all of those years. not a friend or loved one in sight. bob didn't like terrance and she gave him evil glares everytime he even attempted to go near her. little did she know he hated her right back. one evening as he was walking adia home from a date, bob was eavsdropping by the bushes. after terrance and adia kissed goodnight terrance walked to his car, smoothed his hair smoothly and smirked. bob knew something was wrong, and she would find out. terrance was up to something, I don't know what it is but I'm going to find out. you can bet on it! bob screamed at terrance. "I knew you were there the whole time you filfhy rat. and you know what? you are right. within days your little adia will be dead, if I have anything to do with it." bob flashed him a glare so evil and angry even the toughest man would back away. bob ran. ran as fast as she could away. she kicked through the front door at her apartment and punched in the numbers of adia's phone number. "adia, please. you have to listen. I was spying on you and terrance tonight. I'm so sorry, but I knew something was wrong with him, and he was an evil man. and he is! adia you have to believe me please." adia yelled at bob for being so foolish and abruptly hung up on her. bob threw down the phone and burst into tears. "my beautiful adia. if only she'd believe me." the next few days adia completley ignored bob, and it hurt her more than words could say. bob still saw terrance and adia quite often, she did everything she could to try to stay out of their sight though. but one night, something told bob she had to follow them. she knew something would happen. she could just feel it. later that night bob was still watching adia and terrance in a nearby park. suddenly bob had the terrible urge to sneeze. it was allergy season and bob was as susceptible to allergies as a flower was to a bee. she sneezed. adia heard it, and immediatley got up to find bob crouching in the bushes blushing madly. bob wanted to run. run as fast as she could away from there. but she couldn't. she had to save adia, even if that risked adia hating her forver. bob shrieked "I know your up to something terrance and you won't get away with it. iwon't let you harm adia". suddenly terrance pulled out I knife and slashed bob across her chest. blood dripped out of her shirt and she was in deathening pain. she lie there helpless and motionless as terrance took ahole of adia and sliced her throat leaving her dead on the bare pavement. stunned, bob was able to get up. the sight of adia shocked her and angered her more than anything in the world. she screamed and burst into tears. "I'm so sorry adia" she'd whisper over and over again between sobs. bob talked to adia. all night. telling her the things she'd always wanted to tell her but never could. told her of the life she had and truly despised without adia after graduation. "I love you adia. you mean the world to me, and although your no longer here on earth you always be in my heart and in my mind. I love you so much adia, words cannot express it." bob flushed through gasps for air and attemption to not pass out right then and there. finally, bob layed her head down on adias shoulder and cried herself to sleep. from a distance, although bob didn't hear, was adia's spirit standing there beside her. "I love you too." adia smiled and then vanished into the darkness.



aaaaaaaaaaand....it's a wrap.
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! adia! bob! TERRANCE MUST DIE! *cries*

chey, this is the best story EVER! MORE MORE MORE MORE!
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Noooo gawddammit! That's not right! Don't die Adidas! I'm with Brandon...Bob HAS to go and get some special forces training then find out why Terrance wanted her dead and slowly torture Terrance and all his family and friends for years and years.
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OMFG! I literally have tears streaming down my face! That was beautiful, really, I felt Bob's pain, you told it in your own unique with with Macdonald's hahahaa, but really it's true to life.....Romeo + Juliet just can't compare
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I gotta say really enjoyed this story!
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*feeds crumbs to Slippy while waiting on next story*
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Oh my..... I thoguth the she was gonna drink sum poison and dye next to her, as R+J, but yeah the super powers seem to be a better way to continue that story

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it was just plain beautiful

chey, you HAVE to write another story YOU JUST HAVE TO!
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Yeah, let's do a campaign or something *gets out the poster paints to make banners*
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*writes on his "WE HEART YOU CHEY...GIVE US MORE STORIES OR ELSE!"* heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
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