New Moons

[Papa Cumbaya]

This is a song I made today, I said I was in the mood for writing, so I made a poem in spanish and this one in english!

(I really don't know how to describe the rythm I'd like to put to it, but it'd certainly be a slow one, with drums maybe)

New Moons

A dream, a reality I must find
A dream, something more than a way to run away
Finally, I can fly without fear
Finally, I can discover what it's never changing
What made you cry so many nights?
Where are you sweet voice?
I don't hear you since you left me

And sail away in this sea of nonsense
Which is life and don't really care about deciding
Who goes and who doesn't, by this way or by that one
Or simply just to get in it
And why to me? Mirror I wish I could see
Those that watched me with no fear
Swearing that I'll be here
For a lot of new moons

This is my reality
Just the memory of a letter on a box
I fought with giants that tried to separate us
I'll never forget you
No matter if you never understand me

And sail away in this sea of nonsense
Which is life and don't really care about deciding
Who goes and who doesn't, by this way or by that one
Or simply just to get in it
And why to me? Mirror I wish I could see
Those that watched me with no fear
Swearing that I'll be here
For a lot of new moons

The river of sadness is not even important now
I'll try to dry it up again

And why to me? Mirror I wish I could see
Those that watched me with no fear
Swearing that I'll be here
For a lot of new moons

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[The Lord of Programming]

An interesting song, Vittorio =)
And a sort of sad one...but at least it seams to be a bit consoling

I like this strong part:
"Finally, I can fly without fear
Finally, I can discover what it's never changing"


And hey...I'm waiting for the audio
But honestly, I think I'm more responsive to melodies than just lyrics

[High Voltage]

nice job Vittorio, when will you record it?

[Do-Rithm]

cool song. good work

[Papa Cumbaya]

Thanks guys... I have a not so good voice, so maybe I'm never recording it! jajaja

Or I can record it and then edit it! jajaja

[Fiona]

i like it, good job, i really like that first line - a dream, a reality i must find

[simsy]

Incredible

This is my fav part:

This is my reality
Just the memory of a letter on a box
I fought with giants that tried to separate us
I'll never forget you
No matter if you never understand me

[Papa Cumbaya]

Thanks so much Simona, your opinion is important to me!

*tries to rep*

[michael1001]

Good Work!
It's Beautiful
Congrutulations

[fernanda]

i like it, good job!!!