My poems. Can you read them?

[Lidka]

Oh, thank you Janet!!! You are such nice friend! Yesterday I wrote song. It shall be here today or tomorrow. Thank you so much. Your wodrs mean alot...

[Lidka]

I wrote song. Hip-hop song. I'm going to record it & give it here tomorrow. And this is lyrics:
God, help me (make world better)
1. My sister irritates our parents and me
She doesn't understand, that she cannot be
So bad... yeah, so bad...
She's vulgar, insolent, she sometimes tells, that
I'm sh*t, I'm stupid. Why is she so bad?
Yeah, bad... She is so bad...

Chorus: Oh, God, help me, help me, make world better,
Do You hear me?
Oh, God, help me, help me, make world better
Cuz You can see,
That my sister, my friends and other people
Sometimes are bad
Oh, God, help me, help me, make world better, cuz this world
Is strange and sad...

2. Guys from my school have told about my friend,
That she is so stupid, that she is mad,
She isn't mad! Why were they so bad? Why...?
She began to cry, they began to laugh,
Smile faded away from her mouth.
Oh... Cuz they had been so bad... Yeah

Chorus: Oh, God, help me...

3. I hate, when people cry...
I love, when everybody are happy!
I wanna better world,
I'm asking You God: make world better!
/Make world better, I'm asking You/

Chorus: Oh, God, help me... /2x

And? What do you think about it? Be sincere! I made guitar chords for this song. I think this is good enough. Tomorrow I'll record & give it here & you'll listen to it. I hope you'll like it.

[N3lly#1fan15]

OMG!!!!
That is soo good..
Dang...
You write some really deep && good lyrics..
I love this song.

[Lidka]

http://www.wrzuta.pl/audio/cdJXlkcix...e_world_better
It sounds better live. My mp3 player isn't good enough for recording.

[furtado-freak]

wow, that dosent even sum it up...you are very talented
have you entered any comps????

[FromMyHands]

First song is just so true, so full of emotions that are very similar to me and my feelings...it's very hard to explain but somehow I've found myself in that poem...
Keep on writing, you're good in it.

[Lidka]

Originally Posted by FromMyHands

First song is just so true, so full of emotions that are very similar to me and my feelings...it's very hard to explain but somehow I've found myself in that poem...
Keep on writing, you're good in it.

Aww... Thank you so much! I wanna be a good songwriter in the future... like Nelly... How sweet of you that you help me in it. If I hear that people like my poems I wanna write more & more! Thanks

[fernandoza]

So good song a live

[Lidka]

My new song. It's about my reflections, about the future, about God... It's in English & Polish & one sentence is in Spanish. I'm newbies in Spanish, so I don't write much in this language.

He's close to me / On jest blisko mnie / El es junto a me

1. I went to my bedroom, turned off the light
And thought :" I wanna sleep",
But then I began to think about life
And I asked myself: "Who will I be?"

"Kim będę? - nie wiem, wie tylko sam Bóg,
To On i tylko On wie".
Więc postanowiłam nie rozmyślać już,
Zamknęłam oczy i śpię...

Chorus:
I śnię
O spełnieniu mych marzeń,
I śnię o drodze pełnej
sukcesów i porażek,
And I dream
About wonderful life,
I dream,
That I'm bird, I can fly...

2. In the morning I got up and looked
In the mirror and I said:
"Who am I? Who will I be? Who?
Cuz now I'm only scared girl".
Boję się, boję co ze mną będzie
Jutro, za tydzień, za rok!
Ale wiem, że Bóg jest ze mną wszędzie
Gdy czynię mój każdy krok

Chorus:
I wiem,
że On nade mną czuwa,
I wiem
z Nim nie czeka mnie zguba,
And I know
I cannot be scared
I know
That God will help / 2x

Y sabo, El es junto a me...
And I know, He is close to me...
I wiem, że On jest blisko mnie...

What do you think?