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My poems. Can you read them?
Well, I wrote 2 poems. Tell me, what do you think about them. Be sincere, please!
My reflections One night I was trying to sleep in my bed, But I couldn't do it, so I began to reflect... About life and about faith... "Where will my soul be after death? And before birth? Where was my soul? And where is God now? I don't know... Maybe in Heaven, somewhere in the sky He's looking at the world at day and at night? Why is Satan fighting with God, if he knows very well, That he never will win, that he's lost in The Hell?" I thought: "I don't know and I won't know it, Cuz that's unintelligible" and I went to sleep. Teenage waste (I wrote it inspired Nelly's song "Explode") I wanna understand young people like me. Why are they looking for designes on TV? There are empty people (I'm not saying, that all), Who give bad example, who offend The Lord. Later girls and boys began to smoke and drink, Stop going to the church, know, what's narcotic, They don't wake up to the fact, that it threatens death, They forget about love, they forget about faith... I can't understand young people well, And all I can do is help.
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I LOVE NELLY FURTADO
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Re: My poems. Can you read it?
Those are soo good my friend.
Keep doing the good poetry. Its soo good.
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Re: My poems. Can you read it?
i like them a lot very good stuff!!!!
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Re: My poems. Can you read it?
VERY GOOD xD
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Re: My poems. Can you read it?
Thank you! Your words mean very much for me. I'll try to wrote next poems. I wanna be English teacher or songwriter... Maybe I'll be
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Re: My poems. Can you read it?
What ever u want to do is Good
u are Good writing ![]() |
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Re: My poems. Can you read it?
good work lidka! they are beautiful
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Re: My poems. Can you read it?
these poems are epic, keep up the good work!
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Re: My poems. Can you read it?
Thank you so much!!!
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Re: My poems. Can you read it?
I know. You are such a good writer..Keep it up && end up like Nelly.
Makin songs.
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