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kimono · 5th Sep 04

the punch that brused my bruse on my cheek
wheres the gentelness that u had?it some how leaked
why did the high tone of your voice scream 2 my face?
why did you always say I was a dicrace?
were is the fist that I expirienced every day,
who spread the rumer that I had another secret love so you left me at bay.
why did the spit of your voice always land on my shirt?
why does love have to be like this, why does love have to hurt?

kimono · 7th Sep 04

please tell me what you think of this poem that I wrote...please be honest, thank you.

honesty is the path that will lead you to justice

suus · 8th Sep 04

I like it aspecially this part why did the spit of your voice always land on my shirt?
hahahah

SeiKetsu · 8th Sep 04

cool sofia !!!!

hellas: greece !!!

kimono · 8th Sep 04

thank u I really feel emotianal when ever I read it 2 my self I shoul be the best 11 year old poet in the world hehe I think talking about love in a poem is the best atractive speak to u soon my nelly fans...speak to u very very soon ha ha ha ah. eh!

kimono · 9th Sep 04

when ever shal the sun rise
it's past 6 o'clock
iv waited a couple months
& still... tick tock hickery dock

kimono · 9th Sep 04

when shal the moon fall
it's past 11
I need to go 2 sleep
and dream of heaven

kimono · 16th Sep 04

when will she arrive on my door-step
it's my dream
well actually when I'm dull in the morning and not in my house..
u know what I mean ; )

Vicious · 16th Sep 04

try putting all your stuff in 1 post please

Silvy · 16th Sep 04

nice poems but yeah try to put all in 1 post

5th Sep 04	#1
kimono Silver Member Join Date: 5th Sep 04 Location: Talk to the Hand biatch!!!!!!! Posts: 600	the punch that brused my bruse on my cheek wheres the gentelness that u had?it some how leaked why did the high tone of your voice scream 2 my face? why did you always say I was a dicrace? were is the fist that I expirienced every day, who spread the rumer that I had another secret love so you left me at bay. why did the spit of your voice always land on my shirt? why does love have to be like this, why does love have to hurt? __________________ Who Do You Think You Are?

7th Sep 04	#2
kimono Silver Member Join Date: 5th Sep 04 Location: Talk to the Hand biatch!!!!!!! Posts: 600	please tell me what you think of this poem that I wrote...please be honest, thank you. honesty is the path that will lead you to justice __________________ Who Do You Think You Are?

8th Sep 04	#4
SeiKetsu Platinum Member Join Date: 10th Jul 04 Location: Morocco Age: 18 Posts: 3,077	cool sofia !!!! hellas: greece !!! __________________ Last.Fm Profile MySpace

8th Sep 04	#5
kimono Silver Member Join Date: 5th Sep 04 Location: Talk to the Hand biatch!!!!!!! Posts: 600	thank u I really feel emotianal when ever I read it 2 my self I shoul be the best 11 year old poet in the world hehe I think talking about love in a poem is the best atractive speak to u soon my nelly fans...speak to u very very soon ha ha ha ah. eh! __________________ Who Do You Think You Are?

9th Sep 04	#6
kimono Silver Member Join Date: 5th Sep 04 Location: Talk to the Hand biatch!!!!!!! Posts: 600	when ever shal the sun rise it's past 6 o'clock iv waited a couple months & still... tick tock hickery dock __________________ Who Do You Think You Are?

8th Sep 04	#3
suus Obsessed Nelly Fan Join Date: 25th Feb 04 Location: Netherlands Age: 20 Posts: 1,034	I like it aspecially this part why did the spit of your voice always land on my shirt? hahahah

16th Sep 04	#8
kimono Silver Member Join Date: 5th Sep 04 Location: Talk to the Hand biatch!!!!!!! Posts: 600	when will she arrive on my door-step it's my dream well actually when I'm dull in the morning and not in my house.. u know what I mean ; ) __________________ Who Do You Think You Are?

16th Sep 04	#9
Vicious Retired administrator Join Date: 13th Jan 02 Location: Belgium Age: 25 Posts: 6,921	try putting all your stuff in 1 post please __________________

16th Sep 04	#10
Silvy Platinum Member Join Date: 24th Mar 04 Location: Mexico Age: 19 Posts: 8,034	nice poems but yeah try to put all in 1 post __________________ No other choice than livin' it! http://myspace.com/silvyvc

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