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Evanescence Has A Song With The Exact Same Title. . . But I Did Not Copy The lyrics. This Is My Version.
I Am Going Through Hell Right Now. . I Am Not Answering Text/Phone Calls. .I Am Very Hurt. At The Same Time I Am Very Confused, . . But I Am Done. I Am Moving On. It Is Going To Be Very Painful. But Maybe I Needed Betrayal To Escape My Happy World That Was Fake. The Verses I Kinda Imagen With A Piano. .Then The Chorus With Hard Guitars And Strings. Last Song I'm Wasting On You So many words went on paper. So many of them, but I can still remember How much I said "I love you". That was the only thing I could do. I could not say it. The truth I wrote was never moonlit. I look at the sky, searching for a why. Why did you betray? Please stay away. The sky is no where near blue This is the last song I'm wasting on you. My sun has been covered. My dreams, you have stattered. Clouds are above me. There is no where to flea. Rain starts to pour down. So much of it, I think i might drown. I look at the sky, searching for a why. Why did you betray? Please stay away. The sky is no where near blue This is the last song I'm wasting on you. Lost in your lies I was very unwise. But now I know the truth And I am done with you. I look at the sky, searching for a why. Why did you betray? Please stay away. The sky is no where near blue This is the last song I'm wasting on you. Who knew? What you said was untrue But I'm done with you I am glad this is the last song i'm wasting on you . . . |
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Location: usa (boo)
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Re: Last Song I'm Wasting On You
Holy s--t.
Wow. I absolutely love that. The first verse reallllllly set the mood. Excellent work, man! |
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Location: Venezuela
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Re: Last Song I'm Wasting On You
I like it a lot, I´d do it in a deeper and stronger way if I was you! So that person would feel really affected or damaged with the lyrics! (if that person is gonna read it but I guess he/she isn´t ever gonna read it)
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Re: Last Song I'm Wasting On You
*stares* you need to meet my best friend halz..... whoa youd get along like a house on fire....
well its a fucking awesome congrads! really good lyrics! |
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Re: Last Song I'm Wasting On You
Great lyrics! Congrats
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