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Old 8th Jun 07   #1
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Arrow Kardeah

Well well... for those who don't know about this... I'm currently writing a story of Fantasy called Kardeah... it's about a sacred land that is the center of all dimensions... The Earth, the heaven, a lot of planets, they're all conected by secret portals with Kardeah... and well, each 1000 years the purest form of Evil revives: Sanat... he tries to control that sacred land and therefore, all the worlds... BUT each 1000 a new generation of Guardians appear to vanish the evil and protect the safety of all the people. Kardeans are born with all the actions other people make in the other dimensions, like... if you killed somebody here in Earth, an powerful evil monster will appear there, or if you saved someone's life risking yours, a very kind hero will appear in that land, if you bitchslapped your sister, a dumb worm may appear in Kardeah... so, that's how it works

This is the 3rd Generation of Guardians, the one of 2003.



Introducing starting in the left-upper corner... the guy with black hair and red armor

Cooby / Red / Fire / Aries
The first guardian of this generation is full of beaten fears and a great heart, he usually thinks most activities are dumb and useless, but he's gonna give all for the things he believes in. Fights a lot with Janice and Bisho.

Zopik / Purple / Thunder / Cancer
He's dumb and happy, he falls in love easily with a lot of girls, have a crush on Janice and Astrid, he's the bestest friend you could have! He loves burritos and never sleeps at night, often pictured like "the ugly loser one". The best friend of Cooby!

Bisho / Sky Blue / Ice / Pisces

The gay guy, he's soooo into him and loves himself so much, he thinks he's the best *cofcofeyalcofcof* (haha) he adores handsome boys but his heart is just for one person: Zopik, he would do anything for him and he gets so jealous when a girl gets around, though, Zopik doesn't have the same feeling, seems he doesn't even notice. Often refers himself as a "she". He hates so much Astrid.

Byanka / Green / Grass / Virgo
The sweet girl, she's so humble and serene... she's so kind and timid nature. She loves gardening, animals and helping people, the best friend of Astrid... she and Bisho seems to be the only ones that see the great heart of Zopik.

Janize / Pink / Wind / Leo
She's a pretty cocky and lonely girl, she's raised just by his father and his 5 brothers, her mother died, she's commonly sad about it but tries to stay rough. She hates the fact all her brothers had blue eyes like her mother and she just deep grey ones. She's pretty smart, beauty and loves to sing, seems she hates everybody, even her cousin Davel (because his great grades) Her relationship with Cooby is pretty special, though.

Davel / Navy Blue / Water / Aquarius
The oldest guy in the team, he's a natural leader, smart, wise, calm, serious and responsible, a bit nerdy, knows a lot about technology, sciences (specially Math) and some martial arts. Cousin of Janice.

Astriid / Yellow / Light / Libra
The problem maker girl, she meets the rest of the guys while being transferred to her new school because of her conduct problems, loves to fight with guys and play jokes, but inside she seems to be so different, she WAS the only friend of Jeesey, her father is in jail in France.

Jeesey / Orange / Earth / Sagittarius

The weird scary lonely one, but a humble heart, he's so into spirituality and he seems to perceive ghosts and some other extrassensorial abilities. He's the richest guardian and he comes from UK, he has a very dangerous heart illness.

Woot, I typed way too much O_o comments?
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Old 8th Jun 07   #2
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Re: Kardeah

This is like a mix of Avatar, Digimon, Pokemon and Dragon Ball.. I see that your inspiration is coming from them!

A good theme, kinda intersting... but... I have a question!! xD You say kardeans born with the actions in Earth, Venus (haha), etc... so if a guy in Venus kill his brother, inmediatly a killer borns in Kardeah? or they born each 1000 years? so if Sanat revived ten years ago that killing... the killer have to wait 990 years to born in Kardeah?... What does his energy does, just floats away in the galaxies waiting for the time to born and fill Kardeah with malice?

That´s kinda confusing and you should fix that!

Hope you understand my question...
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Cool.. like it.
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Re: Kardeah

Thanks guys!

And no no no, Manuel, they're just born instantly, if you kick me in the butt, a not so powerful evil monster or a tricky one may appear in Kardeah right now. Sanat was created more than 2000 years ago, he just reappears each 1000 years.
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Re: Kardeah

wow cooby!!! that is awesome! i want to read this story!!!!
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wowwww i dint know you wrote comics!! i think the plot is cool!! and omg one character name is cooby!! it is my favorite!! haha
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Re: Kardeah

Wow! That's an ambitious project Coobs! If you've thought about the general settings and got your heros characteristics, you could start writing short stories, or comics, with different problems they encounter and all...Cool! you started in 2003?

Oh, and Kardeah (pronounced as Kar-dee-ah) means Heart in Greek Perhaps Kardeah is the heart of universes
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Thanks Syria and Bill!

I have the general settings, in fact, I have he whole story made, Kardeah's story divides in 8 parts. I have thought everything about 4-6, and I'm fixing some details in 1-3, 7-8 are on the way, and I have an idea of what I want to happen there.

One thing that I love is that all the characters are charged with a lot of personality, people that have read Kardeah find it easy to get identified with one or more of the characters, they're easy to love.

And yeah, I started to create the idea long ago, I was like 12, in the eve of 2000. (So, I can't get any kind of inspiration from Avatar, since it was released in 2005) oh... and I don't think it has any kind of influence by Pokemon or Dragon Ball Z (I don't even like the last one) but yeah, there's something Digimonish (though, I started Kardeah before than knowing about it) and some influence of Saint Seiya there.

And woot! I didn't know that about Kardeah, heart... that's even cooler than I thought I think "Cardea" is also the name of a Roman Goddess, the one who controls the keys, the locks, the doors and so on, since Kardeah has a lot of portals I thought it was a great name, but now with that Greek meaning is WAY lot better!
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Re: Kardeah

wow coobs this is awesome, it does remind me of avatar (i love that show). i cant believe how much work you've put into this, i cant wait to read more!

EDIT: i tried to rep you but, alas, i must spread some reputation around before giving it to cooby again! great work, im impressed!
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