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Jaz · 30th Jan 06

You are what I want
Can you feel what I feel
Please tell me it is real
You are more than only one night
I know my feelings are all right
Take me into a world I've never been
Please let me stay there forever
You make me feel like no one else will do ever
I know I found the one and that is you
Stop breathing if I can't be with you no more

The Lord of Programming · 31st Jan 06

Awww...that's cute

I really like it

How long did it took for you to write it? (When you know it

)

nenevhng · 31st Jan 06

That's nice, it would be very good as a love song lyrics.

PhnXofFolklore47 · 31st Jan 06

excellent. that is good and you are a good writer Jaz

Emma · 31st Jan 06

Hours ive spent crying: 14- roughly

Susi thats so beautiful...im so proud of you

Jaz · 31st Jan 06

thanks everyone! Nice to read that u all like it! Thx!

@Thaddäus: I can't remember anymore how long it took me lol

Emma · 1st Feb 06

Quote:

Originally Posted by Jaz

thanks everyone! Nice to read that u all like it! Thx!

@Thadd?us: I can't remember anymore how long it took me lol

su always writes at night..what do i tell you about staying up till all hours lol

masterdarth · 1st Feb 06

Nice poem , definely some heart and soul went into writing the piece.

The Lord of Programming · 1st Feb 06

Quote:

Originally Posted by Emma

su always writes at night..what do i tell you about staying up till all hours lol

Yes, it's so great staying up till the next day and doing internet stuff/other pc-thingies

Jaz · 1st Feb 06

Quote:

Originally Posted by The Lord of Programming

Yes, it's so great staying up till the next day and doing internet stuff/other pc-thingies

yeah damn right!

30th Jan 06	#1
Jaz Vanilla Join Date: 8th Jan 05 Location: Germany Age: 18 Posts: 2,667	just a lil poem You are what I want Can you feel what I feel Please tell me it is real You are more than only one night I know my feelings are all right Take me into a world I've never been Please let me stay there forever You make me feel like no one else will do ever I know I found the one and that is you Stop breathing if I can't be with you no more __________________ www.myspace.com/skatzz

31st Jan 06	#2
The Lord of Programming La vida es fantástica Join Date: 21st Apr 04 Location: BaWü, Germany Age: 21 Posts: 3,171	Re: just a lil poem Awww...that's cute I really like it How long did it took for you to write it? (When you know it ) __________________ All is relative...except for the Horst Deppert Clan retarD is what you are supposed to be!

31st Jan 06	#3
nenevhng Say: Olhos Join Date: 13th Sep 04 Location: Madeira Island - Portugal Age: 25 Posts: 1,070	Re: just a lil poem That's nice, it would be very good as a love song lyrics. __________________ Saudade...saudade...saudade...

31st Jan 06	#4
PhnXofFolklore47 I Join Date: 4th Oct 05 Location: Maryland, USA Age: 17 Posts: 70	Re: just a lil poem excellent. that is good and you are a good writer Jaz __________________ "I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you......And now you curse the day i decided to stay true to myself."

31st Jan 06	#5
Emma Flugzeuge im mein Bauch Join Date: 17th Dec 04 Location: - Age: 19 Posts: 4,442	Re: just a lil poem Hours ive spent crying: 14- roughly Susi thats so beautiful...im so proud of you __________________

31st Jan 06	#6
Jaz Vanilla Join Date: 8th Jan 05 Location: Germany Age: 18 Posts: 2,667	Re: just a lil poem thanks everyone! Nice to read that u all like it! Thx! @Thaddäus: I can't remember anymore how long it took me lol __________________ www.myspace.com/skatzz

1st Feb 06	#8
masterdarth Palladium member Join Date: 14th Jan 02 Location: Between here and Saturn Posts: 3,541	Re: just a lil poem Nice poem , definely some heart and soul went into writing the piece. __________________ Keep searching for the truth it's not far away, it is closer than you think!

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