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Leesa · 29th Jan 04

my second freestyle - it's shorter

we know what we want
we dream and dream of what we could be
but it's hard to form this relationship
through a computer screen of shit
I wish I could hold you, you wish the same
feelings so strong it'll drive us both insane
tears falling to love songs of our dedications
bills over the top just to keep up with our expectations
but it doesnt matter cause I feel for you this way
and ill listen and cry everytime you say "maybe one day"

INKY · 29th Jan 04

I actually thought it was gonna be like the start of the spice girl song. "tell me what you want, what you really want." But yeah it's nice. So who's this your talking about?

The Welshman · 29th Jan 04

I thought it was gonna be Fat-boy Slim stylee!!

"They know what is what, but they don't know what is what, they just strutt, what the f**k!"

Nikki · 29th Jan 04

Well, I'm actually gonna comment on the actual freestyle! I like it, I like how you don't use, like, OTT words etc, you just get straight down to the heart of the matter, with no messing round - me likes

nellified · 29th Jan 04

aww that was beautiful

Daisy · 30th Jan 04

that's really good leesa I love your way of writing

Daisy · 30th Jan 04

opps double posted said sumat about floodgates so I reposted it

Once again lees it's really good

Leesa · 31st Jan 04

Quote:

Originally Posted by INKY

I actually thought it was gonna be like the start of the spice girl song. "tell me what you want, what you really want." But yeah it's nice. So who's this your talking about?

lol inkle ya queer you!

the poem is about...

nellified · 31st Jan 04

yeah, who is it??

INKY · 1st Feb 04

Quote:

Originally Posted by Leesa

Quote:

Originally Posted by INKY

I actually thought it was gonna be like the start of the spice girl song. "tell me what you want, what you really want." But yeah it's nice. So who's this your talking about?

lol inkle ya queer you!

the poem is about...

Nottin being gay, not that I am.

29th Jan 04	#1
Leesa is blood thirsty. Join Date: 22nd Mar 03 Location: Sydney Age: 19 Posts: 8,135	my second freestyle - it's shorter we know what we want we dream and dream of what we could be but it's hard to form this relationship through a computer screen of shit I wish I could hold you, you wish the same feelings so strong it'll drive us both insane tears falling to love songs of our dedications bills over the top just to keep up with our expectations but it doesnt matter cause I feel for you this way and ill listen and cry everytime you say "maybe one day" __________________ Old skool Furtado represent. www.last.fm/user/angryprincess

29th Jan 04	#2
INKY Gold Member Join Date: 12th Feb 03 Location: Melbourne Victoria Australia Posts: 4,159	I actually thought it was gonna be like the start of the spice girl song. "tell me what you want, what you really want." But yeah it's nice. So who's this your talking about? __________________ We all know when you make an assumption, you make an ass out of "U" and "Mption".

29th Jan 04	#3
The Welshman I'm Candy-Coated Sandman! Join Date: 21st Nov 03 Location: Cardiff, Wales Age: 28 Posts: 7,000	I thought it was gonna be Fat-boy Slim stylee!! "They know what is what, but they don't know what is what, they just strutt, what the f**k!" __________________ <3 Layla http://www.myspace.com/candycoatedsandman Nelly is irrelevant - Jez

29th Jan 04	#4
Nikki Old-skool 4 lyfe. <3 Join Date: 7th Nov 02 Location: Bayside. Age: 23 Posts: 16,682	Well, I'm actually gonna comment on the actual freestyle! I like it, I like how you don't use, like, OTT words etc, you just get straight down to the heart of the matter, with no messing round - me likes __________________ Make me a mixtape that makes me yours; don't leave out Husker Du, put something on that The Cars did in 1982. It makes me yours.

30th Jan 04	#6
Daisy Bounce Bounce Bounce Join Date: 15th Sep 03 Location: new zealand Age: 19 Posts: 918	that's really good leesa I love your way of writing __________________ I'm a part-time prophetess

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