Haunting Heart

[lordassmonkey]

This is a poem I wrote a couple nights ago on a slow night at work at walmart.
It was about this amazing Kiss I got at a club which i know sounds so dirty but I tell u it wasnt like a trashy thing it felt odd cuz like well just read

the music stops
light show comes to an end
our heat creates an energey
the taste of your lips
makes the reality world dead
noone else can exsist to me
the passion i have longed for
throws all emotions at me at once
I belong to you now
in this moment
Stoned in my own confusion
on a wicked trip of what i wanted
has finnaly come
PLEASE!! Tell me it's not a dream
Did you just do the impossible?
Envoked the spirits of Him
lingering in my heart
The spirits are gone
Now i need you
To protect
The feeling of lonlienes no longer here
for it is your shadows that will now haunt me
Once the music starts the light will shine
The people will gather near
HAUNT ME PLEASE!!!!
Take me and call me
Yours
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! <3

[masterdarth]

I feel it.

[Leesa]

Ohh that is definitely a poem you need to read through slowly to take in all the emotions. That is so cool. I feel that too. And it sounds very very tasty. I can relate to that in context. It's cool.

The 'I love you' at the end was a bit 'Whoa, Nelly!!', but.

[lordassmonkey]

Thank you for the awesome replies

[Jose_XO]

and awesome poem !