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Old 17th Jun 07   #1
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"Fallen Angel"

I wrote this for an ex-friend of mine at work who's been doing some real shady stuff lately that I won't go into any detail of.



Don't try to hide it
Because it's already too obvious
I don't speak for everyone else
But I know myself
That you're a conniving witch
A backstabber
Your false concern and insincere apologies
No longer affect me
I won't lower myself to your standards
I've already shown enough support
For you to shove it back in my face
I just don't understand
How one can be so faceless
And go behind everybody's back
Hate is too strong of a word for me
But I can say I regret ever meeting you
Just leave me alone
Whore
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Re: "Fallen Angel"

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That you're a conniving witch
I Could Of Found A Better Way To Write This . LOL JK JK

Why Did You Choose That Title?

I Like It. . . I Like How People Put Their Emotions On Writing.
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I enjoy reading this kinda stuff, i mean, i know you must be suffering but i have a crush on sad things! Don´t know why, but they seem sooo more real for me than those HAPPY EVERYTHING´S GOOD AND PINK poems and songs!

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Re: "Fallen Angel"

^ Yeah, I tried writing a sequel to a popular (for lack of a better term) short story that I did in high school. The sequel had a happy ending, but overall people didn't like it as much as the original. I write darkness a lot better.


As for why I chose the title, I think it's because I regarded her as an angel because she was my first close friend at work (I've been there almost a year now, and only that long) because she did a lot to help me at that time. But she's changed.........a lot.
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