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"Fallen Angel"
I wrote this for an ex-friend of mine at work who's been doing some real shady stuff lately that I won't go into any detail of.
Don't try to hide it Because it's already too obvious I don't speak for everyone else But I know myself That you're a conniving witch A backstabber Your false concern and insincere apologies No longer affect me I won't lower myself to your standards I've already shown enough support For you to shove it back in my face I just don't understand How one can be so faceless And go behind everybody's back Hate is too strong of a word for me But I can say I regret ever meeting you Just leave me alone Whore
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Re: "Fallen Angel"
I Could Of Found A Better Way To Write This
. LOL JK JKWhy Did You Choose That Title? I Like It. . . I Like How People Put Their Emotions On Writing. |
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Re: "Fallen Angel"
I enjoy reading this kinda stuff, i mean, i know you must be suffering but i have a crush on sad things! Don´t know why, but they seem sooo more real for me than those HAPPY EVERYTHING´S GOOD AND PINK poems and songs!
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Re: "Fallen Angel"
^ Yeah, I tried writing a sequel to a popular (for lack of a better term) short story that I did in high school. The sequel had a happy ending, but overall people didn't like it as much as the original. I write darkness a lot better.
As for why I chose the title, I think it's because I regarded her as an angel because she was my first close friend at work (I've been there almost a year now, and only that long) because she did a lot to help me at that time. But she's changed.........a lot.
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