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Nobody Can Control Me
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The Broken Sky (The Silent Whisper)
Ha i was bored so i started writing. (Class is killing me!)
one of my friends TRIED to steal a twenty dollar bill from me yesterday so i kinda wrote this beacuase of that, Asshole. Anyway here goes nothing __________________________________________ The Broken Sky (The Silent Whisper) I look at the sky And listen closely to words of non beleif I wait for the moment to savour the hour I never get any releif The sun rises high And then it swings low In hopes to catch my heart And it takes with it souls But still plays its role I wait for the night to start The stars twinkle bright In the skys night In hopes to be the one standing out The stars are so deadly Yet their so beautiful So i stand and begin to shout The moon is so silent What is it up to? Hiding behind the bright sun It seems to know something so alone and so quiet Maybe that nothing can be undone So I listen closely In hope's to catch a sound Even though nothing is there I'm waiting for you But I cant wait forever I hear your footsteps climbing the stairs I look threw the meadow But no one is there I understand only what I see I listen for the softest whisper and then it meets my ear And runs away as though it was free So I take it back Before it escapes Because its mine and only mine I tuck it away Hide it from the world I'll listen when i have the time So i sit back down And continue with the sky And wait ever so patiently Quickly it makes its move Look there it is! I grab the sun and moon I put it in my pocket What are you doing? I Try to make some room So one by one Please you must stop I pluck the stars from the sky I tuck them away And now they are gone And now i hear the sky cry I sit back down In complete darkness Beacuase i've hidden away the light And i continue to listen I wait for your call But i dont understand I've waited forever But what were you waiting for? For you to take my hand So i walk away Your hopes are now broken Maybe ill find you alone I dont have much But a pocket full of stars And im ready to take myself home I turn my head around In complete darkness In hopes to find some light But i've taken it away And do you think it was worth it? And can never find the night So I drown in my wants Your unsatisfied greed And I wonder why I fail to find and awnser Not even inside Why I hear me crying So im told the awnser By the Silent whisper Why im all alone Its beacuase of what ive done The most silent whisper And now i know why I moan I feel the sorrow The cry from above? I feel the emotion and depth And now im afraid Not beacuase I regret what I've done But becuase I've done what I'll regret ___________________________________________ I hoped you liked it ![]() All this beacuase of twenty dollars, Haha Oh gawd *re-reads* This is looooong you were right kat.... My writing does go on.
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Re: The Broken Sky (The Silent Whisper)
lol, it is long, but it still rocks!!! lol
i love this bit Quote:
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