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Old 16th Apr 07   #1
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The Broken Sky (The Silent Whisper)

Ha i was bored so i started writing. (Class is killing me!)
one of my friends TRIED to steal a twenty dollar bill from me yesterday so i kinda wrote this beacuase of that, Asshole.

Anyway here goes nothing

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The Broken Sky (The Silent Whisper)

I look at the sky
And listen closely
to words of non beleif

I wait for the moment
to savour the hour
I never get any releif

The sun rises high
And then it swings low
In hopes to catch my heart

And it takes with it souls
But still plays its role
I wait for the night to start

The stars twinkle bright
In the skys night
In hopes to be the one standing out

The stars are so deadly
Yet their so beautiful
So i stand and begin to shout

The moon is so silent
What is it up to?
Hiding behind the bright sun

It seems to know something
so alone and so quiet
Maybe that nothing can be undone

So I listen closely
In hope's to catch a sound
Even though nothing is there

I'm waiting for you
But I cant wait forever
I hear your footsteps climbing the stairs

I look threw the meadow
But no one is there
I understand only what I see

I listen for the softest whisper
and then it meets my ear
And runs away as though it was free

So I take it back
Before it escapes
Because its mine and only mine

I tuck it away
Hide it from the world
I'll listen when i have the time

So i sit back down
And continue with the sky
And wait ever so patiently

Quickly it makes its move
Look there it is!
I grab the sun and moon

I put it in my pocket
What are you doing?
I Try to make some room

So one by one
Please you must stop
I pluck the stars from the sky

I tuck them away
And now they are gone
And now i hear the sky cry

I sit back down
In complete darkness
Beacuase i've hidden away the light

And i continue to listen
I wait for your call
But i dont understand

I've waited forever
But what were you waiting for?
For you to take my hand

So i walk away
Your hopes are now broken
Maybe ill find you alone

I dont have much
But a pocket full of stars
And im ready to take myself home

I turn my head around
In complete darkness
In hopes to find some light

But i've taken it away
And do you think it was worth it?
And can never find the night

So I drown in my wants
Your unsatisfied greed
And I wonder why

I fail to find and awnser
Not even inside
Why I hear me crying

So im told the awnser
By the Silent whisper
Why im all alone

Its beacuase of what ive done
The most silent whisper
And now i know why I moan

I feel the sorrow
The cry from above?
I feel the emotion and depth

And now im afraid
Not beacuase I regret what I've done
But becuase I've done what I'll regret

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I hoped you liked it
All this beacuase of twenty dollars, Haha


Oh gawd *re-reads*
This is looooong you were right kat.... My writing does go on.
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Old 19th Apr 07   #2
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Re: The Broken Sky (The Silent Whisper)

lol, it is long, but it still rocks!!! lol
i love this bit
Quote:
The sun rises high
And then it swings low
In hopes to catch my heart
thats awesome! wow cant believe you got so much out of 20 dollars! hehe
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