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Old 24th Mar 06   #1
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In a weird moment last night. thats what I wrote
And no I'm not gonna kill myself


I'm killing myself cuz I'm sad,
I'm killing myself cuz I'm already dead.
I'm killing myself slowly,
I'm killing myself in a hurry.
I'm killing myself cuz I'm hurt,
I'm killing myself cuz it hurts.
I'm killing myself cuz I am me
I'm killing myself cuz I bleed.
I'm killing myself cuz I'm broken,
I'm killing myself cuz I can't work it.
I'm killing myself cuz I'm faked,
I'm killing myself cuz I'm made.
I'm killing myself to find an end,
I'm killing myself so I'll be happy again.
I'm killing myself a better way,
I'm killing myself to find the strength.
I'm killing myself, but are you killing me?!
I'm killing myself, Can you hear it?
I'm killing myself just to be happy again !
I'm killing myself, but I'm already dead!!!
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Old 24th Mar 06   #2
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Too sad. Don't like the feelings that that script could create in me.
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Re: Beautifully dead
Hmmm I do think it's good cos it conveys a sense of realness from when you wrote it. I don't like to censor art and I won't do so, but if it was something I had written I would censor myself in this case.
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I don't like so much your poem. sorry!
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Old 27th Mar 06   #5
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Originally Posted by nellymany
In a weird moment last night. thats what I wrote
And no I'm not gonna kill myself


I'm killing myself cuz I'm sad,
I'm killing myself cuz I'm already dead.
I'm killing myself slowly,
I'm killing myself in a hurry.
I'm killing myself cuz I'm hurt,
I'm killing myself cuz it hurts.
I'm killing myself cuz I am me
I'm killing myself cuz I bleed.
I'm killing myself cuz I'm broken,
I'm killing myself cuz I can't work it.
I'm killing myself cuz I'm faked,
I'm killing myself cuz I'm made.
I'm killing myself to find an end,
I'm killing myself so I'll be happy again.
I'm killing myself a better way,
I'm killing myself to find the strength.
I'm killing myself, but are you killing me?!
I'm killing myself, Can you hear it?
I'm killing myself just to be happy again !
I'm killing myself, but I'm already dead!!!
ammm thats good.but its not too much happy ..
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Re: Beautifully dead
LOL @ "And no I'm not going to kill myself"

It was nice. I didn't like how you ended it "But I am already dead" because it was already used in the second line (sort of)

My favorite line was "I'm killing myself cuz I can't work it"
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I thought you said you were happy now...
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