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MuSiC iS eVeRyThInG
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Alone- By Kimm-A
Hey everyone, i was in a thinking, contemplative mood last night so i decided to write another poem. While writing this one i was listening to 9 Crimes by Damien Rice <3 which kinda gave me the mood for the whole poem, so if you have heard that amazing song, keep it in the back of your mind
Alone I sit here Alone, there is nothing you can say. There is nothing you could do to make this feeling go away. Do you understand and can you fathom, The darkness of this soul and how it does spasm? Can you see all that you mean to me? How desperately I wish I could leave you and finally be free? I love you but at the same time there is hate, The frustration is building no longer can I wait. Each day it gets worse but I try to hold strong How can it be something so real could be so wrong? Go away and leave me already, I give up and my chest is still heavy. You have no idea yet you still wonder who, You thought you had me solved but this story is half through. How could I be so foolish and how could you not see My infatuation building, now there is no need for me. So once again I am alone and wishful, While you are gone seated high upon your stool. So next time just think, and remember to stop One more touch and I will surely drop. This is so pathetic I can’t even shout Please oh please will somebody let me out? |
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Re: Alone- By Kimm-A
thats really good!!! =]
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Re: Alone- By Kimm-A
IMPRESSIVE!!! I love it
that must be a really good song you were listening x)
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Re: Alone- By Kimm-A
Kimmy! It s totally great!!! So amazing! I really love it, sometime i got that mood too
![]() U should use ur guitar to make the music for this song ![]() |
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MuSiC iS eVeRyThInG
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Re: Alone- By Kimm-A
Ohh thanks everyone
And Nat, hehe i think im just going to keep it as a poem, im afraid of ruining it completely if i turned it into a song XD |
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Re: Alone- By Kimm-A
Such a great poem! Really!! I loved it! It´s sad and I love dark things!
Congratulations Can you see all that you mean to me? How desperately I wish I could leave you and finally be free? You have no idea, of how many times I´ve felt in that way! :-( Your job was amazing with this! ![]() |
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Re: Alone- By Kimm-A
I love it, Kim! really good, I wouldn't be able to write such poem myself. Can't you send me that song some day?
If you say it's amazing, then I wanna listen to it jeje
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Re: Alone- By Kimm-A
This is great
I think it can become a great song ![]()
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